When completing the Winter Wolf guest, I noticed these typos.
1. When reading this marked sentence below, the comma (,) in the "...a while now, and heard..." made me pause for a bit, thinking it felt unnecessary to have. I looked it up, and according to some sites that does grammar checking, it comes up as a "unnecessary comma in a compound predicate." and should consider being removed.
2. In the sentence, "With all off the family...", it should be (of) instead of (off).
3. In the sentence, "...but you sometimes you've got to...", the first (you) is unnecessary.
1. When reading this marked sentence below, the comma (,) in the "...a while now, and heard..." made me pause for a bit, thinking it felt unnecessary to have. I looked it up, and according to some sites that does grammar checking, it comes up as a "unnecessary comma in a compound predicate." and should consider being removed.
2. In the sentence, "With all off the family...", it should be (of) instead of (off).
3. In the sentence, "...but you sometimes you've got to...", the first (you) is unnecessary.