During "Play Naughty" with Kiyoko, there are some minor typos on the second page.
1. About halfway through, there is a double punctuation.
2. There is a mix up of the words (an) and (a). It should say, "a rabid" instead of "an rabid".
3. In a sentence, there is a wrong use of a pronoun. It says "...sperm which must be traveling...", when it should say "...sperm THAT must be traveling...".
4. There should be a comma after the word "point". "...but at this point, Kiyoko...".
1. About halfway through, there is a double punctuation.
2. There is a mix up of the words (an) and (a). It should say, "a rabid" instead of "an rabid".
3. In a sentence, there is a wrong use of a pronoun. It says "...sperm which must be traveling...", when it should say "...sperm THAT must be traveling...".
4. There should be a comma after the word "point". "...but at this point, Kiyoko...".
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