[Catching Aya in the cellar]
[Catching Aya > Don't Let Go]
[Kinu illness]
[Next visit after illness]
'Mother's' should be apostrophe s instead of s apostrophe.
[Catching Aya > Don't Let Go]
Should be 'resolute as it's ever'.
[Kinu illness]
Should be 'lying on the ground on a futon' or 'lying upon the ground on a futon' or 'lying on the ground upon a futon' (Probably not that last one).
Should be 'the little kitsune's face screws up'.
Should be a space between sentences.
Remove the second 'tails'.
[Next visit after illness]
Should be 'how she discovers'.