Azra Blowjob Scene-Commission (Submitted)

[BloodyTears]

Hello Folks,

I'd like to share a sweet little Blowjob-Scene for my beloved Azra that Foxxling is doing for me with everyone. Please enjoy!

The Scene's not done yet, but once Foxxling deems it properly edited and finished, he'll submit it for approval.

Also just for info, all thanks due to Wsan giving us the permission for it, we'll be doing a handful of Lund/Sub-Lund scenes for wang-wielding Players at some point in the future.

I'll update this thread and post them in here once they become available.

 

[QuietCoyote]

Hello Folks,

I'd like to share a sweet little Blowjob-Scene for my beloved Azra that Foxxling is doing for me with everyone. Please enjoy!

The Scene's not done yet, but once Foxxling deems it properly edited and finished, he'll submit it for approval.

Also just for info, all thanks due to Wsan giving us the permission for it, we'll be doing a handful of Lund/Sub-Lund scenes for wang-wielding Players at some point in the future.

I'll update this thread and post them in here once they become available.

if i recall correctly, Fen had a blowjob scene planned for Azraquest, might want to bring this up with him.

Edit: upon further reading, this does not fit the style, nor is there any actual dialogue between PC and Azra, which makes it very out of place to the rest of her content. If you say this is not done, I would tent to agree and suggest that dialogue and slight reworking would be in order. Furthermore, she's a Suula, not a Sulan.

 

[Foxxling]

if i recall correctly, Fen had a blowjob scene planned for Azraquest, might want to bring this up with him.

Edit: upon further reading, this does not fit the style, nor is there any actual dialogue between PC and Azra, which makes it very out of place to the rest of her content. If you say this is not done, I would tent to agree and suggest that dialogue and slight reworking would be in order. Furthermore, she's a Suula, not a Sulan.

This scene isn't part of a quest it is a repeatable sex scene for the player's ship.

As the writer, I'm all for making edits to better fit Azra's character. Dialogue is kept at a minimum because, as a gay guy, I don't interact with Azra sexually. So anything that seems out of place with that regard everybody should feel free to comment on. I did my best to make it a good scene but when it comes to her personality, verbal ticks and other I could use the help.

I'll review comments later today or tomorrow so that people have a chance to look into it

 

[Foxxling]

Azra Scene Update

Progress: Thanks to EVERYONE who helped me clean up the technical issues with the gdoc. I used ctrl+f to find all incorrectly spelled mentions of Suula which was a funny little fuck up but also if they're misspelled in exhotic (see what I did there) and unique ways I missed them lol. If anyone sees anything else along those lines lmk. I've also gone through and expanded the parts I wanted to expand for my own sanity, taken out the things I placed as place holders because my brain was either on a specific track or shutting down.

To Do: A few comments from the commissioner need to be taken care of, all things to improve the overall enjoyment of the scene. I also want to add dialogue to her scene so I'm studying her sexy times gdoc to get a better feel for her voice before I place additional place holder talk stuff that will be refined... hopefully, it'll make the scene seem more realistic. Again suggestions are welcome

In my home town there is currently another fucking snow storm (we've legit had one every week for a while) which may be great for writing if all these kids chill in the room with someone other than me.

 

[Foxxling]

Azra Scene Update

Progress: Took care of everything I was supposed to do including the comm's comments and inserting place holder dialogue

To Do: Further refine the dialogue and after that just one last read-through of the whole gdoc before submission to FenCo. Thanks everybody for the help, additional comments and suggestions are helpful as always

Also I've noticed that a lot of the dialogue is kind of straight porn milfy dialogue so i'll probably keep in that track. I'll of course still read the origial sex scenes to keep that going.

 

[Foxxling]

One more editing pass and you'll be able to stick a fork in this scene cause it will be done

 

[Foxxling]

Fork's in, i'm submitting it

THANKS FOR ALL THE HELP PPL

 

[BloodyTears]

Update for those interested:

Fen reviewed Azra's scene and Foxxling has done the requested edits to it. Here's hope that the new scene does get approved and added to Azra's content in the future.