For as loud as I have been about my personal content preferences, I thought it would be really bad taste not to show appreciation where appropriate. Kalysea's content + good end is perfectly debauched in all the right ways. Imho, good writing involves the author not only entertaining the reader, but pulling off a narrative voice that does not constantly pull your attention to the fact that it is writing - you focus entirely on what's being described instead of the work's style pulling you back to remember you are engaging with a medium. Most of the writers in this project pull that off 90% of the time, Wsan obviously hitting the mark.
It's been critisized as a negative, but I love the fact that Kalysea just expects the PC to serve right after giving the second item. It is strong characterization, and the first red flag that she might be dangerous to the independently minded.
I love the perversion in her expecting the PC to take serving her as a reward becasue it speaks to how she really sees the PC and the hidden intentions she has.
The "Training" scenes are peak sub/dom smut.
The very concept of the ring + gorget chain is deeply perverse.
The only negative I'll put here is agreement with a comment from the main page where Bluevirus comments on more travelling scenes. I don't think He/she was asking for a prolonged state change for the PC. They were commenting on how quickly the PC becomes corrupted by Kalysea's wishes and saying it would have been better if their resistances fell away over a longer period of time across more scenes. They weren't asking for new state requirements of the code, just more corruption over time debauchery and repeatable scenes based on the corruption. More of what the author is quite good at writing. When it comes to corruption storylines, the journey is the destination - the buildup of change for the pc over time more important in a lot of ways than the payoff. The contrast of how the subject character started versus how they end is the meat of the meal - and there is nothing to eat if they are identical images.
Thanks again to Wsan for the work he does for the project. To me specifically the futa dommes. Kalysea and her bad end are now my favorites right alongside Jerryn from TiTs. Her score is easily GiantHorseCock/10.
I have not ingratiated myself on these forums. I have not hidden my unpopular opinions and respond in kind when attacked or misrepresented. I don't want the things I appreciate to go unsaid though. Big thumbs up to the team and the writers, not just for the things laid out here, but for the whole game. There's a lot of care that clearly goes into the design and the worldbuilding. That's not to say that it's perfect. It is to say that the care leads to better quality overall whether it's perfect or not.
If there's appreciation you as a reader want to give for anything specific about the game, the floor is yours.
It's been critisized as a negative, but I love the fact that Kalysea just expects the PC to serve right after giving the second item. It is strong characterization, and the first red flag that she might be dangerous to the independently minded.
I love the perversion in her expecting the PC to take serving her as a reward becasue it speaks to how she really sees the PC and the hidden intentions she has.
The "Training" scenes are peak sub/dom smut.
The very concept of the ring + gorget chain is deeply perverse.
Ending up as a glorified magic battery and the implication that the aim was her intention all along is testament to Kalysea's lewd villainy.
The only negative I'll put here is agreement with a comment from the main page where Bluevirus comments on more travelling scenes. I don't think He/she was asking for a prolonged state change for the PC. They were commenting on how quickly the PC becomes corrupted by Kalysea's wishes and saying it would have been better if their resistances fell away over a longer period of time across more scenes. They weren't asking for new state requirements of the code, just more corruption over time debauchery and repeatable scenes based on the corruption. More of what the author is quite good at writing. When it comes to corruption storylines, the journey is the destination - the buildup of change for the pc over time more important in a lot of ways than the payoff. The contrast of how the subject character started versus how they end is the meat of the meal - and there is nothing to eat if they are identical images.
Thanks again to Wsan for the work he does for the project. To me specifically the futa dommes. Kalysea and her bad end are now my favorites right alongside Jerryn from TiTs. Her score is easily GiantHorseCock/10.
I have not ingratiated myself on these forums. I have not hidden my unpopular opinions and respond in kind when attacked or misrepresented. I don't want the things I appreciate to go unsaid though. Big thumbs up to the team and the writers, not just for the things laid out here, but for the whole game. There's a lot of care that clearly goes into the design and the worldbuilding. That's not to say that it's perfect. It is to say that the care leads to better quality overall whether it's perfect or not.
If there's appreciation you as a reader want to give for anything specific about the game, the floor is yours.
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