A Femdom Adventure (0.02)

[koblas]

The game talks about an adventurer, Eric, who really wants to travel around the world. But many dangers lie outside his village. This part of the game is a sequel to "A Femdom Adventure Demo", where you have to complete a special training. In fights girls will try to get you excited and make you cum , because that will make you weaker or exhausted (but when you are not in a fight, cumming is a pleasure). Thanks to all those who helped me with advices and suggestions. I will try to add more animations in the future.
The game is still in progress. I would really appreciate if you could report eventual bugs.

You can find me on patreon: https://www.patreon.com/koblas

The game contains: Femdom, Foot Fetish, Tits, Ass, Female Domination, Wrestling, Oral sex, Vaginal Sex, Male Protagonist, Handjob, Fantasy, Monster girls, Bondage, Reverse Domination, Footjob

Link of the game:
https://mega.nz/#!TXYVmYga!b3Xu5iiWVVK8m76A_x_bJLX9qQtRKf9k-ug6xGBL9hQ

 

[DawnCry]

So let's see... there are a few things that have become better but there are quite a few things that need to be better:

-About maps while your bedroom and the village overall are ok, the rest of your house needs a lot of work, basically you can walk on walls and it's better to always end the room with walls everywhere rather than an open ending for the place.

-The game doesn't give any indication about how to continue, I mean, the sister says that she will charge you money next time but all she says is "Ehy" or something like that. Overall the game I have seen two jobs, watering plants and cleaning things in the bar/restaurant. As a player I have to ask, why do I want to earn money? where do I use it? I can't even buy a weapon.

-The quest system is kind of... weird, I mean you add the quest itself as an item, it would make more sense at the very least if you just added one item, a quest log and then there we would go to a new window in which all quests appear.

-Found a slime girl, got caught and it's like 2 lines and then I appear on my house, at the very least say if you escape or is it like "you went back in time before you were killed", even more it seems that the slime girl doesn't remember if she caught me before.

-Thief girl is kind of weird. Nothing else can be added here.

Overall, I just don't understand what I'm doing as a player, I talk to the captain, all the pub, all the people I meet but even so... I don't know how to unlock new things. However a few recommendations:

-Add a submissive stat for the player or something like that, why? because it can be used as a key for scenes, variations and reactions, for example when the sister is about to push the MC so that he receives the "free service", it would make sense that you can actually decline it rather than just accepting it or that at some point your character has the "need" for her services.

-In fact you could add a submissive stat towards the main girls or important ones.

-Give a few tips about what the player can do within the game

-The princess seems too weird that she would go to a bar with the king and without guards, even more going everyday...

-Add a few random conversations rather than just one line that is repeated over and over.

-Find and solve bugs such as when you talk to the sister for the first time, it will make the place she was unwalkable, be aware of the ability of walking over something that shouldn't be walked.

-Basically add a tutorial or something about ways to earn money, why you want to earn money (as a player) and what do I have to do at the moment.

 

[kachowski labowski]

So let's see... there are a few things that have become better but there are quite a few things that need to be better:

-About maps while your bedroom and the village overall are ok, the rest of your house needs a lot of work, basically you can walk on walls and it's better to always end the room with walls everywhere rather than an open ending for the place.

-The game doesn't give any indication about how to continue, I mean, the sister says that she will charge you money next time but all she says is "Ehy" or something like that. Overall the game I have seen two jobs, watering plants and cleaning things in the bar/restaurant. As a player I have to ask, why do I want to earn money? where do I use it? I can't even buy a weapon.

-The quest system is kind of... weird, I mean you add the quest itself as an item, it would make more sense at the very least if you just added one item, a quest log and then there we would go to a new window in which all quests appear.

-Found a slime girl, got caught and it's like 2 lines and then I appear on my house, at the very least say if you escape or is it like "you went back in time before you were killed", even more it seems that the slime girl doesn't remember if she caught me before.

-Thief girl is kind of weird. Nothing else can be added here.

Overall, I just don't understand what I'm doing as a player, I talk to the captain, all the pub, all the people I meet but even so... I don't know how to unlock new things. However a few recommendations:

-Add a submissive stat for the player or something like that, why? because it can be used as a key for scenes, variations and reactions, for example when the sister is about to push the MC so that he receives the "free service", it would make sense that you can actually decline it rather than just accepting it or that at some point your character has the "need" for her services.

-In fact you could add a submissive stat towards the main girls or important ones.

-Give a few tips about what the player can do within the game

-The princess seems too weird that she would go to a bar with the king and without guards, even more going everyday...

-Add a few random conversations rather than just one line that is repeated over and over.

-Find and solve bugs such as when you talk to the sister for the first time, it will make the place she was unwalkable, be aware of the ability of walking over something that shouldn't be walked.

-Basically add a tutorial or something about ways to earn money, why you want to earn money (as a player) and what do I have to do at the moment.

I just about agree with everything stated. This is a BIG step up from the demo you released, and there aren't as many grammatical errors. There's still some, but those still aren't that bad.

I did have a feeling of being lost, and I still haven't figured out what to do in order to progress. I bought the armor and weapon, (you have to walk up to the actual armor, shield, and sword in the store) I experienced the handjob scenes from the women in the casino, the scene from the sister, the woman in Eric's conscience, and the slime scene that teleports the player back to their room. I cleaned, watered plants, and I fought some bats and slimes. I even bought the doggy costume.

But after that, I had no idea what I was supposed to do. Another thing that bothered me is that these scenes aren't animated. Of course, that takes tons of time, and I don't expect too much from a game in it's 0.02 at the latest, but I hope to see animations further down the line once you become supported more. Oh, and give Eric's dick an urethra. When he cums, the semen just makes it look like his dick is shiny.

 

[koblas]

I just about agree with everything stated. This is a BIG step up from the demo you released, and there aren't as many grammatical errors. There's still some, but those still aren't that bad.

I did have a feeling of being lost, and I still haven't figured out what to do in order to progress. I bought the armor and weapon, (you have to walk up to the actual armor, shield, and sword in the store) I experienced the handjob scenes from the women in the casino, the scene from the sister, the woman in Eric's conscience, and the slime scene that teleports the player back to their room. I cleaned, watered plants, and I fought some bats and slimes. I even bought the doggy costume.

But after that, I had no idea what I was supposed to do. Another thing that bothered me is that these scenes aren't animated. Of course, that takes tons of time, and I don't expect too much from a game in it's 0.02 at the latest, but I hope to see animations further down the line once you become supported more. Oh, and give Eric's dick an urethra. When he cums, the semen just makes it look like his dick is shiny.

At the 7th day, when you exit from your house there is a cutscene, after that you have to talk with your dad to start the story. After that you have to go where you found the bandit and enter in the structure in front of you. There is one animation (at the end of this version) But I agree that there should be more. Maybe I should do less drawings but animated and of better quality

 

[koblas]

Ok, thanks for the infos. Some things that you described are actually bugs :l

 

[koblas]

I have to update the link because there is a bug
Edit: I've fixed a problem,with the new link you will be able to start the story . You can use your saved files