I came across three mistakes when letting the pent up elf boy in the Old Woods fuck you in the ass:
1) "[He's] hugging your midsection and rubbing his cheek against you back, [...]". "You" should probably say "your".
2) "[...] the wide range of sensations your experiencing [...]". "Your" should probably say "you're".
3) "Losing track of time, you slip into a stupor of bliss as your moist butthole, lost completely to pleasure for who knows how long." I think the second comma is unnecessary.
I am playing the game on Steam.
1) "[He's] hugging your midsection and rubbing his cheek against you back, [...]". "You" should probably say "your".
2) "[...] the wide range of sensations your experiencing [...]". "Your" should probably say "you're".
3) "Losing track of time, you slip into a stupor of bliss as your moist butthole, lost completely to pleasure for who knows how long." I think the second comma is unnecessary.
I am playing the game on Steam.