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[Kalmaro]

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[kachowski labowski]

I've been keeping an eye on this doc, love the idea personally, it's definitely what I'm into . I'll try and help out with the editing process when/wherever I can.

 

[SoAndSo]

My first gripe is the name. Consider that this is space year 3000, consider how language is likely to evolve in that time, also consider that Laura is a human name, not a name from the culture of a massive metal reptile lizard race.

Bit more effort in the detail goes a long way.