One more set of typos ready for treatment! Much smaller this time, too. 
Entry Format:
***** Name of the character or issue *****
( Scene or situation ) - Problem text or error description
Typos and errors are set in red within the problem text like so: [ typo or error ]
'FIX:' My suggestion(s) on how to fix the problem, if possible.
***** Hyraxi Alpha *****
Combat - You manage to avoid the Hyraxi Alpha’s blind shoot.
FIX: shot
Combat - The Hyrax Alpha steps forward, pistol clutched tight to their side as he takes a few searing potshots. The glowing bolts hem you toward a wall as he closes the intervening distance. You duck low slide out of the confining pattern before the follow-up strike arrives.
FIX: duck low and slide
Give Blowjob - Your legs quivers, and your drooly slit shudders with orgasmic contractions as you squirt jet after long jet of slippery girl-cum all over the counter’s paneling. Your jizz splashes on the metallic surface and hits the floor, making a mess of the place.
FIX: legs quiver
Defeat - The boy kneels down to whisper in your ear: “Don’t worry, I’m gonna make sure you like it.” By the time you feel the pinprick of a needle on your thigh, it’s already too late. In just a few moments, you can already feel your skin flushing with arousal. Aided by your accelerated heartbeat, the drug spreads through your body like wildfire your pussy getting wetter by the second.
FIX: wildfire, your
With Johana -> Mating Press - “Oh, that’s just kinda sad. Lemme show you what an actual dick looks like,” Johana says, hooking her thumbs into her belt. She shimmies out of her pants, revealing a fat brown cock just starting to come to full mast; her rod’s half again the raider’s size, and her balls dwarf smother against his completely as she squats down, rubbing her junk against his. “Heh. Little boy’s got a little toy. I can see why Donut only wants your tongue. It’s probably longer.”
FIX: 'her balls press against his' or 'her balls rest upon his' (Perhaps? The scene still has the same issue as before in my previous Phaedra thread.)
Public Use -> Oral - His hole is getting filled with so many loads that the floor is turning into a white puddle — and the bitch-boy ‘alpha’ is loving every minute of it. You try to last as long as possible with the boy’s sublime mouth French-kissing your pussy, but eventually you remember you’ve got a train to save.When you feel your climax approaching, you grab the boy’s hair and shove him even deeper into your crotch, moaning more than loud enough to draw the attention of his crew, so they can burn the image in their minds as you cream the face of their ‘alpha’ with jet after jet of slippery girl-cum at point-blank range.
FIX: Add space between '.' and When
Public Use -> Oral -> Next - When you select this option, there seems to be an issue with producing the scene for the first time. It only shows the first half of a paragraph before asking you to press 'Next' again, then it displays the rest of the scene as normal.
FIX: Remove the need to press the 'Next' option twice to proceed.
Throbb Ride - Both Scenes - No loss of vaginal or anal virginity in these scenes.
FIX: Self-explanatory
'Fight Hyrax' Button and tool-tip - Fight Hyrax
FIX: Hyraxi
***** Hyraxi Codex *****
Hyraxi Codex - Appearance section - Females who are born have a hugely enlarged, phallic-shaped clitoris and oversized labia that partially fuse together to obscure and shroud the vagina, making penetration very difficult and tight to even the males’ smaller phalluses. This enlarged clitoris is much more sensitive than a male’s phallus, and can become at least partially erect (fully erect in some cases). Evidence, especially the highly-encouraged submissive, sexually receptive role of males in Hyraxi society, indicates it is commonly used for the penetration of others. However, this enlarged female sex also hampers both birth and insemination, putting yet another obstacle in the way Hyraxi fertility.
FIX: way of Hyraxi
Hyraxi Codex - Missing a line break before 'History & Society'
FIX: Insert line break
***** Glowing Hyrax Raider *****
Victory - The mutated hyrax falls to his knees, unable to continue fighting in the face of the beating you’re giving him. He huffs and growls before starting to paw at his body, ripping off the remainder of his clothes and bearing his full, nude form to you. The strange hyena man calms down after that, looking at you and panting in a strangely submissive way while his cock strains, drooling onto the ground.
FIX: baring
***** Johana *****
Combat - Johana drops to the ground, the burden of her injuries too high to endure. “Fuuuuuu-...” she drawls. “...No! Not yet.” The dusky outlaw staggers back up onto her feet with a worrysome wobble. She produces a medipen from a pouch and jabs it into one of her meaty thighs, dragging herself back into the fight with a combination of steely will and coreward super-science. (H: +150) (E: +0)
FIX: worrisome
***** Son of Jissara *****
Engineering - After using the crew's ship keys - The main engineering area sits through a bulkhead at the back of the ship, dominated by a massive power reactor that stretches down into a lower deck. There’san unlocked door on the north bulkhead with a large label printed over it reading “COMPUTER CORE | SECURE LOCKERS” while to the west, there’s a ladder leading east into the heart of the engines.
FIX: There's an unlocked
Engineering - Before using the crew's ship keys - The main engineering area sits through a bulkhead at the back of the ship, dominated by a massive power reactor that stretches down into a lower deck. There’sa locked door on the north bulkhead with a large label printed over it reading “COMPUTER CORE | SECURE LOCKERS” while to the west, there’s a ladder leading east into the heart of the engines.
FIX: There's a locked
***** Train Quest *****
Galley Car - You slowly slide door to the southern car open, investigating the source of the crashing and banging. Through the crack, you can glimpse another gang of hyrax raiders pillaging what appears to be a dining car.
FIX: slide the door to
***** Phoenix Shine *****
Combat - > Tease -> Kiss Balls - You get close to the Hyraxi Alpha and manage to trip him!
Before he can react, you lean down between his legs, heft his scrotum to your mouth and press your crimson-laced lips against it.
Ruby lip marks keep accumulating on the rapidly filling testes until your hyrax foe manages to get away from you, not without a needy expression on his face. he’s blue balled! (L: +3)
FIX 1: hyraxi
FIX 2: He's blue balled!
Entry Format:
***** Name of the character or issue *****
( Scene or situation ) - Problem text or error description
Typos and errors are set in red within the problem text like so: [ typo or error ]
'FIX:' My suggestion(s) on how to fix the problem, if possible.
***** Hyraxi Alpha *****
Combat - You manage to avoid the Hyraxi Alpha’s blind shoot.
FIX: shot
Combat - The Hyrax Alpha steps forward, pistol clutched tight to their side as he takes a few searing potshots. The glowing bolts hem you toward a wall as he closes the intervening distance. You duck low slide out of the confining pattern before the follow-up strike arrives.
FIX: duck low and slide
Give Blowjob - Your legs quivers, and your drooly slit shudders with orgasmic contractions as you squirt jet after long jet of slippery girl-cum all over the counter’s paneling. Your jizz splashes on the metallic surface and hits the floor, making a mess of the place.
FIX: legs quiver
Defeat - The boy kneels down to whisper in your ear: “Don’t worry, I’m gonna make sure you like it.” By the time you feel the pinprick of a needle on your thigh, it’s already too late. In just a few moments, you can already feel your skin flushing with arousal. Aided by your accelerated heartbeat, the drug spreads through your body like wildfire your pussy getting wetter by the second.
FIX: wildfire, your
With Johana -> Mating Press - “Oh, that’s just kinda sad. Lemme show you what an actual dick looks like,” Johana says, hooking her thumbs into her belt. She shimmies out of her pants, revealing a fat brown cock just starting to come to full mast; her rod’s half again the raider’s size, and her balls dwarf smother against his completely as she squats down, rubbing her junk against his. “Heh. Little boy’s got a little toy. I can see why Donut only wants your tongue. It’s probably longer.”
FIX: 'her balls press against his' or 'her balls rest upon his' (Perhaps? The scene still has the same issue as before in my previous Phaedra thread.)
Public Use -> Oral - His hole is getting filled with so many loads that the floor is turning into a white puddle — and the bitch-boy ‘alpha’ is loving every minute of it. You try to last as long as possible with the boy’s sublime mouth French-kissing your pussy, but eventually you remember you’ve got a train to save.When you feel your climax approaching, you grab the boy’s hair and shove him even deeper into your crotch, moaning more than loud enough to draw the attention of his crew, so they can burn the image in their minds as you cream the face of their ‘alpha’ with jet after jet of slippery girl-cum at point-blank range.
FIX: Add space between '.' and When
Public Use -> Oral -> Next - When you select this option, there seems to be an issue with producing the scene for the first time. It only shows the first half of a paragraph before asking you to press 'Next' again, then it displays the rest of the scene as normal.
FIX: Remove the need to press the 'Next' option twice to proceed.
Throbb Ride - Both Scenes - No loss of vaginal or anal virginity in these scenes.
FIX: Self-explanatory
'Fight Hyrax' Button and tool-tip - Fight Hyrax
FIX: Hyraxi
***** Hyraxi Codex *****
Hyraxi Codex - Appearance section - Females who are born have a hugely enlarged, phallic-shaped clitoris and oversized labia that partially fuse together to obscure and shroud the vagina, making penetration very difficult and tight to even the males’ smaller phalluses. This enlarged clitoris is much more sensitive than a male’s phallus, and can become at least partially erect (fully erect in some cases). Evidence, especially the highly-encouraged submissive, sexually receptive role of males in Hyraxi society, indicates it is commonly used for the penetration of others. However, this enlarged female sex also hampers both birth and insemination, putting yet another obstacle in the way Hyraxi fertility.
FIX: way of Hyraxi
Hyraxi Codex - Missing a line break before 'History & Society'
FIX: Insert line break
***** Glowing Hyrax Raider *****
Victory - The mutated hyrax falls to his knees, unable to continue fighting in the face of the beating you’re giving him. He huffs and growls before starting to paw at his body, ripping off the remainder of his clothes and bearing his full, nude form to you. The strange hyena man calms down after that, looking at you and panting in a strangely submissive way while his cock strains, drooling onto the ground.
FIX: baring
***** Johana *****
Combat - Johana drops to the ground, the burden of her injuries too high to endure. “Fuuuuuu-...” she drawls. “...No! Not yet.” The dusky outlaw staggers back up onto her feet with a worrysome wobble. She produces a medipen from a pouch and jabs it into one of her meaty thighs, dragging herself back into the fight with a combination of steely will and coreward super-science. (H: +150) (E: +0)
FIX: worrisome
***** Son of Jissara *****
Engineering - After using the crew's ship keys - The main engineering area sits through a bulkhead at the back of the ship, dominated by a massive power reactor that stretches down into a lower deck. There’san unlocked door on the north bulkhead with a large label printed over it reading “COMPUTER CORE | SECURE LOCKERS” while to the west, there’s a ladder leading east into the heart of the engines.
FIX: There's an unlocked
Engineering - Before using the crew's ship keys - The main engineering area sits through a bulkhead at the back of the ship, dominated by a massive power reactor that stretches down into a lower deck. There’sa locked door on the north bulkhead with a large label printed over it reading “COMPUTER CORE | SECURE LOCKERS” while to the west, there’s a ladder leading east into the heart of the engines.
FIX: There's a locked
***** Train Quest *****
Galley Car - You slowly slide door to the southern car open, investigating the source of the crashing and banging. Through the crack, you can glimpse another gang of hyrax raiders pillaging what appears to be a dining car.
FIX: slide the door to
***** Phoenix Shine *****
Combat - > Tease -> Kiss Balls - You get close to the Hyraxi Alpha and manage to trip him!
Before he can react, you lean down between his legs, heft his scrotum to your mouth and press your crimson-laced lips against it.
Ruby lip marks keep accumulating on the rapidly filling testes until your hyrax foe manages to get away from you, not without a needy expression on his face. he’s blue balled! (L: +3)
FIX 1: hyraxi
FIX 2: He's blue balled!