Scene: Clear You TF
Usage: Skin
Problem: Typo
Suggestion: I believe "reaming" is meant to be "remaining".
"As you set about donning your gear, you notice there's a bit of residual heat reaming. It seems the lotion has made you just a bit more sensitive...."
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NPC: Run Cow - Sally
Scene: SuckleFuck? I don't remember name.
Problem: Typo
Suggestion: two possible solutions.
1) add a comma between the second"pump" and "in".
2) remove the second " and pump".
Note: brackets [ ] and parentheses ( ) added by me.
"...batter your thoughts, keeping you well and focused on suckling Sally's tits while your hips pump [and pump (,) ]in and out of the cowgirl, so tight and warm around your phallus."
Usage: Skin
Problem: Typo
Suggestion: I believe "reaming" is meant to be "remaining".
"As you set about donning your gear, you notice there's a bit of residual heat reaming. It seems the lotion has made you just a bit more sensitive...."
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NPC: Run Cow - Sally
Scene: SuckleFuck? I don't remember name.
Problem: Typo
Suggestion: two possible solutions.
1) add a comma between the second"pump" and "in".
2) remove the second " and pump".
Note: brackets [ ] and parentheses ( ) added by me.
"...batter your thoughts, keeping you well and focused on suckling Sally's tits while your hips pump [and pump (,) ]in and out of the cowgirl, so tight and warm around your phallus."
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