Multiple Typos in the Beth's Busty Broads, Trappify Scene with Kat.
Scene by Nonsuch
First:
"Yes," she goes on, smirking thinly down at it. "The mods do also cause a certain bump to your, uh, vim.
Problem:
Ending quote mark goes before the comma.
From "Yes," to "Yes",
Second: Same scene.
"There," coos Kat, after the gene mods are finally done with you.
Problem:
Ending quote mark goes before the comma.
From "There," to "There",
Third: Same scene
This leaves you with narrow hips anda tiny touch of femininity to it, with gentle curves and exquisitely large lips.
Problem:
Needs Space between "And" and "a"
Screenshots Provided
Scene by Nonsuch
First:
"Yes," she goes on, smirking thinly down at it. "The mods do also cause a certain bump to your, uh, vim.
Problem:
Ending quote mark goes before the comma.
From "Yes," to "Yes",
Second: Same scene.
"There," coos Kat, after the gene mods are finally done with you.
Problem:
Ending quote mark goes before the comma.
From "There," to "There",
Third: Same scene
This leaves you with narrow hips anda tiny touch of femininity to it, with gentle curves and exquisitely large lips.
Problem:
Needs Space between "And" and "a"
Screenshots Provided
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