After purifying Eryka and asking to eat her out, there are some mistakes in the second, third and fourth round.
Second round:
After Eryka says something to you, it reads: "You saw nothing in reply [...]". I believe it should say: "You say nothing in reply [...]".
Third round:
"[...] you're only to happy to [...]" should probably say "[...] you're only too happy to [...]".
"[...] it's hard to hear make any noise [...]" should probably say "[...] it's hard to hear her make any noise [...]".
Fourth round:
"[...] until you fall flat onto back [...]" should probably say "[...] until you fall flat onto your back [...]".
"Or what little you can hear of it, giving where your ears are." should probably say "Or what little you can hear of it, given where your ears are."
During a streak of sentences all starting in "you want", one of them starts with "You watch to reach up [...]". This should probably also say "you want". Furthermore, when utilizing this kind of repetition, you should probably stick to one type of punctuation. Right now, it reads as "You want ...; You want ... . You want ... and you want ...". In my opinion, it would be better to just use commas instead of a semi-colon and a period.
Lastly, somewhere in there (I think it was the beginning of the third round, might be wrong though) Eryka exclaimed something like "By the Eight, [PC name]!", which I find odd, considering there aren't eight gods but seven. The author couldn't have misremembered, since Eryka later asks "How many times are you going to make me use the seven's name in vein?" or something like that. If the phrase "By the Eight" is intentional, then I don't know what it is referring to.
I am playing the game on Steam.
Second round:
After Eryka says something to you, it reads: "You saw nothing in reply [...]". I believe it should say: "You say nothing in reply [...]".
Third round:
"[...] you're only to happy to [...]" should probably say "[...] you're only too happy to [...]".
"[...] it's hard to hear make any noise [...]" should probably say "[...] it's hard to hear her make any noise [...]".
Fourth round:
"[...] until you fall flat onto back [...]" should probably say "[...] until you fall flat onto your back [...]".
"Or what little you can hear of it, giving where your ears are." should probably say "Or what little you can hear of it, given where your ears are."
During a streak of sentences all starting in "you want", one of them starts with "You watch to reach up [...]". This should probably also say "you want". Furthermore, when utilizing this kind of repetition, you should probably stick to one type of punctuation. Right now, it reads as "You want ...; You want ... . You want ... and you want ...". In my opinion, it would be better to just use commas instead of a semi-colon and a period.
Lastly, somewhere in there (I think it was the beginning of the third round, might be wrong though) Eryka exclaimed something like "By the Eight, [PC name]!", which I find odd, considering there aren't eight gods but seven. The author couldn't have misremembered, since Eryka later asks "How many times are you going to make me use the seven's name in vein?" or something like that. If the phrase "By the Eight" is intentional, then I don't know what it is referring to.
I am playing the game on Steam.
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