[0.8.31] Hotaru Pregnancy typos

Ace Hangman

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Hotaru > Pregnancy Offer (Accept)

1. 'to do'
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Hotaru > Have Meal (after getting her pregnant, if that matters)

2. Remove 'and' (unless there's a parser for something else).
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Hotaru > Have Meal > Bother

3. Not a typo, but this is after she's conceived (early in pregnancy). She has come out only in a sheer apron and nothing else. You can see that in image #2 here, in the same line highlighted.
Not sure if there should be a [preg] check parser and an apron line added in, but she isn't wearing clothes earlier in the scene.
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4. Seems like a parser misplacement, like 'caressing her baby bump gently' but I cannot see the behind-the-scenes intentions.
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5. This indicates she's clothed in her normal attire, this scene (pregnant, presumably) has her in a sheer apron and the next few lines are talking about her underwear and undressing her, which is not an issue in just the apron. Might need to add a pregnancy parser with an apron line here (which sounds really fun, to me, but it's also work and I am not writing this).
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6. Clothing mention in scene where she's wearing nothing but a sheer apron.
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7. Add a space here. Likely just inside the preg parser.
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8. Clothing mention when she's only wearing an apron. Probably just a simple preg parser check with the word 'apron' instead of 'clothes' would suffice, but I am not author.
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