[0.7.6] Summoning Snowy Typos

[teawolf]

Once more! [Repost because I accidentally put it in the wrong thread!]

Period after "snap" should go within the quotation marks:
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Rest of these are the go down on her option:

"Are slid" should be "slide:"
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"He's" should be "she's on her back:"
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Could argue this is stylistic, but I think this semicolon should be a colon since it introduces the following action:
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Fuck this is so cute. Cut comma after "laughter:"
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Thanks again!

 

[zagzig]

Sorry, I can't view any of the attachments and I'm not sure what content this is.

 

[teawolf]

Oh this is obnoxious. Let me see if I still have these. Sorry!