[0.7.6] Fox Den Typos

[teawolf]

In Hotaru's scene with Kiyoko watching, missing space after "lust," and the semicolon after "display" should be a comma, or cut entirely:


Semicolon after "hair" should be a period, or "no" should be uncapitalized:


Period after "right" should be a comma:


Semicolon after "immediately" should be a comma:


Semicolon after "vixen" should be a comma, or "bringing" should be "brings:"


Semicolon after "breathe" should be a comma:


"Pushes" should be "push:"


Semicolon after "made" should be a comma:


"It's" should be uncapitalized, and the semicolon after "you" should be a comma:

 

[teawolf]

In the sandwich scene with Miko and Mai, in the middle, space missing before the gender parser/"m'lord:"


Should be "reputation as" or "for being a," I think:


Should be "shoulder blades:"


Space missing before the gender parser/"yer lordship:"


In Tetsuya's appearance scene, should be "there are no," since calluses and scars are technically countable:


Missing comma after "featherlight:"