These get sent to me by other people who aren't on the forums or don't want to have to type out topics themselves, so I may not know all the options they chose or whether they've been corrected but not implemented yet. Sometimes I have to guess where they're from.
Hana and Rindo
1. Seems like 'it' should be 'in'.
I would also look at the next paragraph where it says 'throw what little remains of your stamina into pounding her tailhole' instead of 'in pounding'
Normally I wouldn't bother, but if you're already on the page.
Frost Pupper > Fuck Her
2. Should be 'as' instead of 'a'.
Also, I see that in the sentence before that, 'pets face' should be 'pet's face' with an apostrophe-s.
Also, I once again entreat you to use your moderately god-like powers to change the giantess's in the page into giantess' with the s-apostrophe instead of the apostrophe-s. I mean, if you're already there.
Drifa > Cleaning
3. Should be 'bury' instead of 'buries'.
Arona > Titfuck
4. Should be 'you' instead of 'your'.
Byvernia > Combat (Victory) (Looks like the second time)
5. Should be a 'you' added in there.
Byvernia > Angry Breed (maybe, they didn't tell me)
6. Looks like this should be 'as' instead of 'to'.
Milly Muffins > Help > Venom Frosting > Go After
7. Should be 'Khor'minos' instead of 'Khor Minos'.
8. Should be 'stream' instead of 'steam'.
Looks like it's about talking her into wearing nothing but an apron.
9. Looks like it should be 'in sight' instead of 'on sight'. Unless the author meant 'on site' like on the premises, but it doesn't feel like it.
Ambra > Sex > Ear Tease
10. Should either be 'by her arms' or 'under her arms' instead of 'by under her arms'.
Hana and Rindo
1. Seems like 'it' should be 'in'.
I would also look at the next paragraph where it says 'throw what little remains of your stamina into pounding her tailhole' instead of 'in pounding'
Normally I wouldn't bother, but if you're already on the page.
Frost Pupper > Fuck Her
2. Should be 'as' instead of 'a'.
Also, I see that in the sentence before that, 'pets face' should be 'pet's face' with an apostrophe-s.
Also, I once again entreat you to use your moderately god-like powers to change the giantess's in the page into giantess' with the s-apostrophe instead of the apostrophe-s. I mean, if you're already there.
Drifa > Cleaning
3. Should be 'bury' instead of 'buries'.
Arona > Titfuck
4. Should be 'you' instead of 'your'.
Byvernia > Combat (Victory) (Looks like the second time)
5. Should be a 'you' added in there.
Byvernia > Angry Breed (maybe, they didn't tell me)
6. Looks like this should be 'as' instead of 'to'.
Milly Muffins > Help > Venom Frosting > Go After
7. Should be 'Khor'minos' instead of 'Khor Minos'.
8. Should be 'stream' instead of 'steam'.
Looks like it's about talking her into wearing nothing but an apron.
9. Looks like it should be 'in sight' instead of 'on sight'. Unless the author meant 'on site' like on the premises, but it doesn't feel like it.
Ambra > Sex > Ear Tease
10. Should either be 'by her arms' or 'under her arms' instead of 'by under her arms'.
