Missing apostrophe and s in "Before long, Asynja fur raises, and she wrinkles her nose"
His used instead of her - in "She digs his claws into your dragonscale and peels it off your body"
And same problem near the end: "before getting to work cleaning his wet pussy with your mouth and tongue"
Double dot ellipsis? or double dot error? "The sudden absence of so much warmth hits you just as hard as one of her powerful thrusts, leaving you gasping and groaning at the sheer relief.."
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