Summon Circle > Lapis Hoplite
Sex > Full-Nelson
1. 'gasps' instead of 'gasp'.
2. Should probably be a line break here after her talking and starting a new section (I wouldn't have bothered if not for the other typo).
Sex > Titfuck
3. 'trying' instead of 'tying'.
Sex > Ride
4. Should either be 'sucks your tongue for a few minutes longer' or 'just 'sucks your tongue a few minutes longer', but I suspect the writer intended 'for'.
5. Should probably be a 'has' here. 'That has milky, white ...'
Sex > Dick-69
6. 'pulses' instead of 'pulse'
7. Remove the extra 'in'.
8. Probably 'noisy sucks' instead of 'nosily'
Sex > Full-Nelson
1. 'gasps' instead of 'gasp'.
2. Should probably be a line break here after her talking and starting a new section (I wouldn't have bothered if not for the other typo).
Sex > Titfuck
3. 'trying' instead of 'tying'.
Sex > Ride
4. Should either be 'sucks your tongue for a few minutes longer' or 'just 'sucks your tongue a few minutes longer', but I suspect the writer intended 'for'.
5. Should probably be a 'has' here. 'That has milky, white ...'
Sex > Dick-69
6. 'pulses' instead of 'pulse'
7. Remove the extra 'in'.
8. Probably 'noisy sucks' instead of 'nosily'