[0.7.34] Temple of Mallach typos

Ace Hangman

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Temple of Mallach > Salwah > Work Clients > Work > Yes (work with Cait) > Rooms > Arona

1. 'contrast' instead of 'contract'. Should probably also have a comma after 'unhurriedly'.

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2. 'strongfat', seems like it might be a parser issue checking for a pregnant Arona, though fat by itself seems harsh.

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Temple of Mallach > Salwah > Work Clients > Work > Yes (work with Cait) > Rooms > Minotaurs

3. 'Fenraus' instead of 'Fenaurus'

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4. 'discounting the last' instead of 'discounting last'

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5. 'writhe' instead of 'write'.

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6. 'ooze' instead of 'oozes'.

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7. 'than' instead of 'that'.

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8. 'spit-roasted' instead of 'spitroasted'. It's a spit roast. When it's happening to you, you're being 'spit-roasted' or are 'spit-roasting'.

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9. "gods know' instead of "gods knows"

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Ace Hangman

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Temple of Mallach > Salwah > Work Clients > Work > Yes (work with Cait) > Rooms > Catfolk

10. Should be 'elaborate' instead of 'elaborated' and should have a comma. 'elaborate pose, mimicking'

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11. Shouldn't be capitalized. Should be one sentence. (Normally I wouldn't bother since it's so minor if you weren't already getting other stuff on the page.)
"...this side of the Ridell?" you tease, crooking a ..."

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12. 'crystalline' instead of 'cristalline'.

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13. "As you wish, big boy," Normally I wouldn't bother posting for just a comma here, or maybe I would, but since you're already here.)

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Temple of Mallach > Salwah > Work Clients > Work > Yes (work with Cait) > Rooms > Lupines

14. Looks like an extra 'magnifance of'. It doesn't appear to be stylistic repetition.

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15. 'poor' instead of 'poro'

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16. 'concupiscent' instead of 'concupid'.

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