[0.7.3 Typos!]

[teawolf]

First time with Ryn when she's pent up, second screen, "taunt" should be "taut:"


On the green ford tile in Harvest Valley, the semicolon after through should be a comma:


When meeting Atani for the first time, the "y" in "you" should be uncapitalized:


After beating the mushroom druidess, there is a comma missing after "Tough:"


When leaving after victory (not fucking), druidess should be uncapitalized:


When meeting Sariel for the first time, "copse" here should be "copses:"


When fisting Sariel, "tacts" should be "tacks" (as in a tack on a ship):


In the same scene, the comma before and should be cut (same clause):


Same scene, missing comma after "fffughk:"

 

[teawolf]

When talking to Ahmri about Harvest Valley, the comma after "males" should be a period (not a dialogue tag):


In the same talk, marefolk is capitalized inconsistently. Based on the codex, it should be lowercase:


The period after "design" should go inside the quotation marks:


In the same scene, "you" should be uncapitalized:


In this graf, a comma should be added after "uhh" and after "than that;" "Daddy" should be capitalized (being used as a name); and the "she" before "bounces" should be capitalized, since it's not a dialogue tag:


In the next graf, the comma after "north" should be a period, since it's not followed by a dialogue tag:


Missing starting apostrophe on "'cause:"


"Continues" is a dialogue tag, so "the" should be uncapitalized:


"Keep" should be uncapitalized. Technically, a dialogue tag should follow "creation," like "[she says] and," but since this is dialogue from Ahmri that's stylistic:

 

[teawolf]

Same scene! Comma after "asks" should be a period:


"The goddess" here should be uncapitalized:


Comma after "today" should be a period:


The comma after "ugh" should be a period, and "listen too" should be "listen to:"


Thank you and more to come!

 

[zagzig]

Should be sorted, cheers.