First time with Ryn when she's pent up, second screen, "taunt" should be "taut:"
On the green ford tile in Harvest Valley, the semicolon after through should be a comma:
When meeting Atani for the first time, the "y" in "you" should be uncapitalized:
After beating the mushroom druidess, there is a comma missing after "Tough:"
When leaving after victory (not fucking), druidess should be uncapitalized:
When meeting Sariel for the first time, "copse" here should be "copses:"
When fisting Sariel, "tacts" should be "tacks" (as in a tack on a ship):
In the same scene, the comma before and should be cut (same clause):
Same scene, missing comma after "fffughk:"
On the green ford tile in Harvest Valley, the semicolon after through should be a comma:
When meeting Atani for the first time, the "y" in "you" should be uncapitalized:
After beating the mushroom druidess, there is a comma missing after "Tough:"
When leaving after victory (not fucking), druidess should be uncapitalized:
When meeting Sariel for the first time, "copse" here should be "copses:"
When fisting Sariel, "tacts" should be "tacks" (as in a tack on a ship):
In the same scene, the comma before and should be cut (same clause):
Same scene, missing comma after "fffughk:"