[0.7.3] Old Forest, Wayfort, Kas Frostwood-encounter typos + small parser bug

[teawolf]

When dominating the Alarune, "She" should be uncapitalized.


After cutting Ryn down from the statue, "'till" should be "'til" (one l):


On the middle, eastern tile in the Wayfort, "took" should be "take:"


After sucking Kas, and saying no to needing more, "broken in" should be "broken-in:"


In the same scene, "passioned" should be "passionate" or "impassioned:"


In the same scene, should be "chance of" or "chance to stop:"


Same scene, a parser bug: I have two companions here, Tui and Ryn. Not sure why there's a possessive--I think that must be an additional typo?


In the quest update text for In Her Footsteps, should cut the extra "had" before "business." This is true in the quest description in the codex as well:

 

[teawolf]

Sorry, few more additions. On the second tile north of the Wayfort, before renovation, "crunches" should be "crunch:"


On the third tile north of the Wayfort, before the blocked-off Frostwood, "foot path" should be one word, and there's a comma missing before "all" ("around it, all the way"):


I also think "wayfort" should be capitalized? Not positive on this one.


Same scene, "hangs" should be "hang:"


On entering Evergreen's house for the first time, cut "that" from after "collection:"


Same scene, "off" should be "through:"


I missed screenshotting it, but in Evergreen's explanation of the vine barrier, there's a line of dialogue where she says "frostwood," with no capital. It looks like, based on the text on the tiles outside, that it should be "Frostwood," with a capital F?

When encountering the feral wolves, "needs" should be "need," since "there's" is singular:


I think, following the plural "bodies" that "mane" should be "manes" here, in the appearance section before fighting the wolves:


When meeting the corrupted lupines, "ensuring to" should be "ensuring they:"


Thanks as always!

 

[zagzig]

"passioned" is certainly less common than passionate and impassioned, but I found a couple of places saying it's a real word. Also the Wayfort capitalisation is really inconsistent so I left that for the time being. The rest should be sorted, cheers.

 

[teawolf]

Cool. Thanks!