When talking to Garret about himself in the logging camp, comma should go inside quotation marks:
Extra space after "Ivris" when talking to Garret about "Elf:"
After defeating Hethia in combat, "punched" should be "punch:"
On the western side of the Old Forest, on the third tile north (the one with a tile going further west to the logging camp), "looks" should be "look:"
After choosing "Talk" with Azzy, the period after "talk" should be a comma, and "you" should be uncapitalized:
In the flirt with Azzy option, "you" should be uncapitalized:
In the health recovery scene, "grass's" should be "grass'" (no "s"):
When cutting down the root menace to reach the Alarune, "sent" should be "send:"
After entering the Alarune's clearing, as a Thief, there's a missing noun here after "Brint's"--help? hand?
o7!
Extra space after "Ivris" when talking to Garret about "Elf:"
After defeating Hethia in combat, "punched" should be "punch:"
On the western side of the Old Forest, on the third tile north (the one with a tile going further west to the logging camp), "looks" should be "look:"
After choosing "Talk" with Azzy, the period after "talk" should be a comma, and "you" should be uncapitalized:
In the flirt with Azzy option, "you" should be uncapitalized:
In the health recovery scene, "grass's" should be "grass'" (no "s"):
When cutting down the root menace to reach the Alarune, "sent" should be "send:"
After entering the Alarune's clearing, as a Thief, there's a missing noun here after "Brint's"--help? hand?
o7!
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