[0.7.29] TwinQuest Typos

[ghostwriter207]

Start of quest:

Dunno if calling Liresh a "meow" is meant to be silly mode only or not, feel free to ignore this one if it's meant to be this way. (I'm not in silly mode)

"pla1ce"

Missing capitalization at the start of the sentence, and the comma after "poofy tails switch" should not be there.

Missing capitalization.

In the fight:

Based on icon, Orc Warrior A appears to be male. Orc Warrior B has the same issue.

Missing comma after "hey," and the punctuation after "that bad" should be a period, not a comma.

After choosing the option to hide from the drunk orcs at the Flagon Wagon:

Missing closing quotation after "I'm-shit-myself-drunk-ese," and there should be a comma there, as well.

Think maybe this was supposed to be italicized.

 

[ghostwriter207]

There was no mention of any elves, or where the Champ and companions are hiding, so this is rather odd.

In the loot room:

"Mallachian" should be capitalized.

Post second fight:

Missing comma after "unconscious"

Regrouping:

Missing commas. "Thanks, [pc.Name], it's beautiful. If nothing else, that's quite a treat to take home."

After fighting Para and Perun:

Should probably specify that the "she" in question is Perun.

Missing capitalization.

Run-on sentence. First comma should be replaced with a period.

Missing capitalization.

Meeting the elf twins:

Missing comma.

This is also something of a run-on sentence, and C-cup should be capitalized.

 

[ghostwriter207]

Negotiating with the elf twins:

Either this comma should be removed, or another should be added after "a knotted dick."

Comma should be a period.

After dealing with the elf twins:

Missing comma after "packing away bottles," and I think the word should be "respectfully," not "respectively."

Leaving Syrish to "console" them:

Missing capitalization.

End of quest:

Missing comma before "do you?"