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<blockquote data-quote="FuHyBi69" data-source="post: 445417" data-attributes="member: 43874"><p>When talking to the Cat Harem about what they want to do after beating Hirrud in Missing Meows, there is a grammar mistake in the fourth paragraph.</p><p></p><p><strong>The Original-</strong></p><p></p><p>Yset chews her plump lip, looking between you and the other kittens. After a long moment, she grins and laces her fingers behind her head. <em>"I can survive anywhere after this. But wherever I go, I want to stay with the girls. They're the only family I have. And hey — being your bed-warmer would be a lot easier, and maybe even more fun, than thieving. Plus... you know, I've kinda always wanted a family of my own, but being a rogue's not exactly conducive <span style="color: rgb(184, 49, 47)">for getting <u>knocking</u> up and popping out kits</span>. A safe little burg like this, though? And with a gal like you... Hmm?"</em></p><p></p><p><strong>My Alteration-</strong></p><p></p><p>Yset chews her plump lip, looking between you and the other kittens. After a long moment, she grins and laces her fingers behind her head. <em>"I can survive anywhere after this. But wherever I go, I want to stay with the girls. They're the only family I have. And hey — being your bed-warmer would be a lot easier, and maybe even more fun, than thieving. Plus... you know, I've kinda always wanted a family of my own, but being a rogue's not exactly conducive <span style="color: rgb(97, 189, 109)">for getting <u>knocked</u> up and popping out kits</span>. A safe little burg like this, though? And with a gal like you... Hmm?"</em></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="FuHyBi69, post: 445417, member: 43874"] When talking to the Cat Harem about what they want to do after beating Hirrud in Missing Meows, there is a grammar mistake in the fourth paragraph. [B]The Original-[/B] Yset chews her plump lip, looking between you and the other kittens. After a long moment, she grins and laces her fingers behind her head. [I]"I can survive anywhere after this. But wherever I go, I want to stay with the girls. They're the only family I have. And hey — being your bed-warmer would be a lot easier, and maybe even more fun, than thieving. Plus... you know, I've kinda always wanted a family of my own, but being a rogue's not exactly conducive [COLOR=rgb(184, 49, 47)]for getting [U]knocking[/U] up and popping out kits[/COLOR]. A safe little burg like this, though? And with a gal like you... Hmm?"[/I] [B]My Alteration-[/B] Yset chews her plump lip, looking between you and the other kittens. After a long moment, she grins and laces her fingers behind her head. [I]"I can survive anywhere after this. But wherever I go, I want to stay with the girls. They're the only family I have. And hey — being your bed-warmer would be a lot easier, and maybe even more fun, than thieving. Plus... you know, I've kinda always wanted a family of my own, but being a rogue's not exactly conducive [COLOR=rgb(97, 189, 109)]for getting [U]knocked[/U] up and popping out kits[/COLOR]. A safe little burg like this, though? And with a gal like you... Hmm?"[/I] [/QUOTE]
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