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[0.7.20]+[0.7.21] Grammar Mistakes and Sentence Format Suggestions
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<blockquote data-quote="FuHyBi69" data-source="post: 445134" data-attributes="member: 43874"><p>When first encountering Eryka, there is poor grammar in the second to last paragraph</p><p></p><p><strong>The Original-</strong></p><p></p><p><em>"You monsters tried to take my soul once,"</em> she begins, <em><span style="color: rgb(255, 255, 255)">"you may have given me a...</span><span style="color: rgb(184, 49, 47)"> <u>male</u> </span><span style="color: rgb(255, 255, 255)">parts</span>, but... I am Eryka, I am a paladin, and I'll never let you take me! YOU CAN'T HAVE MY SOUL!!"</em> she howls, lunging at you.</p><p></p><p><strong>My Alteration-</strong></p><p></p><p><em>"You monsters tried to take my soul once,"</em> she begins, <strong><em><span style="color: rgb(239, 239, 239)">"you may have given me a... </span><span style="color: rgb(97, 189, 109)"><u>male's</u></span><span style="color: rgb(239, 239, 239)"> parts</span>,</em></strong><em> but... I am <strong>Eryka</strong>, I am a paladin, and I'll never let you take me! YOU CAN'T HAVE MY SOUL!!"</em> she howls, lunging at you.</p><p></p><p>This one could be subjective of course</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="FuHyBi69, post: 445134, member: 43874"] When first encountering Eryka, there is poor grammar in the second to last paragraph [B]The Original-[/B] [I]"You monsters tried to take my soul once,"[/I] she begins, [I][COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 255)]"you may have given me a...[/COLOR][COLOR=rgb(184, 49, 47)] [U]male[/U] [/COLOR][COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 255)]parts[/COLOR], but... I am Eryka, I am a paladin, and I'll never let you take me! YOU CAN'T HAVE MY SOUL!!"[/I] she howls, lunging at you. [B]My Alteration-[/B] [I]"You monsters tried to take my soul once,"[/I] she begins, [B][I][COLOR=rgb(239, 239, 239)]"you may have given me a... [/COLOR][COLOR=rgb(97, 189, 109)][U]male's[/U][/COLOR][COLOR=rgb(239, 239, 239)] parts[/COLOR],[/I][/B][I] but... I am [B]Eryka[/B], I am a paladin, and I'll never let you take me! YOU CAN'T HAVE MY SOUL!!"[/I] she howls, lunging at you. This one could be subjective of course [/QUOTE]
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