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<blockquote data-quote="FuHyBi69" data-source="post: 445491" data-attributes="member: 43874"><p>After defeating Alissa and the Abyssal Thing during the In Her Footsteps quest, there is a possible grammar mistake at the end of the fourteenth paragraph</p><p></p><p>The Original-</p><p></p><p><em>"My second act as regent is to confer amnesty to all our druidic brothers and sisters who live in exile in the Frostwood,"</em> Ryn continues. <em>"If not for their courageous actions embodied in Hethia Runasdottir, Alissa's corruption may never have come to light. The threat that my sister and the demon who controlled her pose is far from over, and the boer'alvar must stand as a people united, not divided by disagreements, however fresh as the wound may be. The time may come when every able-bodied woman, man, and even half-sexed may be called to the defense of the Winter City, <span style="color: rgb(184, 49, 47)">and this rift in our people needs <u>more</u> healing more than ever."</span></em></p><p><em></em></p><p><em><span style="color: rgb(255, 255, 255)">My Alteration-</span></em></p><p><em><span style="color: rgb(255, 255, 255)"></span></em></p><p><em><span style="color: rgb(255, 255, 255)"><em>"My second act as regent is to confer amnesty to all our druidic brothers and sisters who live in exile in the Frostwood,"</em> Ryn continues. <em>"If not for their courageous actions embodied in Hethia Runasdottir, Alissa's corruption may never have come to light. The threat that my sister and the demon who controlled her pose is far from over, and the boer'alvar must stand as a people united, not divided by disagreements, however fresh as the wound may be. The time may come when every able-bodied woman, man, and even half-sexed may be called to the defense of the Winter City, </em></span><span style="color: rgb(97, 189, 109)"><em>and this rift in our people needs healing more than ever."</em></span></em></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="FuHyBi69, post: 445491, member: 43874"] After defeating Alissa and the Abyssal Thing during the In Her Footsteps quest, there is a possible grammar mistake at the end of the fourteenth paragraph The Original- [I]"My second act as regent is to confer amnesty to all our druidic brothers and sisters who live in exile in the Frostwood,"[/I] Ryn continues. [I]"If not for their courageous actions embodied in Hethia Runasdottir, Alissa's corruption may never have come to light. The threat that my sister and the demon who controlled her pose is far from over, and the boer'alvar must stand as a people united, not divided by disagreements, however fresh as the wound may be. The time may come when every able-bodied woman, man, and even half-sexed may be called to the defense of the Winter City, [COLOR=rgb(184, 49, 47)]and this rift in our people needs [U]more[/U] healing more than ever."[/COLOR] [COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 255)]My Alteration- [I]"My second act as regent is to confer amnesty to all our druidic brothers and sisters who live in exile in the Frostwood,"[/I] Ryn continues. [I]"If not for their courageous actions embodied in Hethia Runasdottir, Alissa's corruption may never have come to light. The threat that my sister and the demon who controlled her pose is far from over, and the boer'alvar must stand as a people united, not divided by disagreements, however fresh as the wound may be. The time may come when every able-bodied woman, man, and even half-sexed may be called to the defense of the Winter City, [/I][/COLOR][COLOR=rgb(97, 189, 109)][I]and this rift in our people needs healing more than ever."[/I][/COLOR][/I] [/QUOTE]
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