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[0.7.20]+[0.7.21] +[0.7.23] Grammar Mistakes and Sentence Format Suggestions
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<blockquote data-quote="FuHyBi69" data-source="post: 445421" data-attributes="member: 43874"><p>When talking to Brother Sanders about Liaden, there is a grammar error in the third paragraph</p><p></p><p><strong>The Original-</strong></p><p></p><p><em>"Lyana was..."</em> he sighs, leaning against the lectern and watching Liaden work. <em>"She was my best friend. There were other women in my life after her, I suppose, but Lyana was the only one who ever captured my heart. But I never knew she had a child at all, much less mine. I suppose... I suppose it was very like her, to not wish to part me from my destiny. Perhaps she heard the stories of my exploits, of the people I was helping, and decided to withhold Liaden's existence. Or as Lia herself says, simply never had a way <strong>to</strong> tell me. I was always on the move as a young man, and as the years passed, <em><span style="color: rgb(184, 49, 47)">my reports to the other paladins <u>become</u> less and less</span></em> frequent."</em></p><p></p><p><strong>My Alteration-</strong></p><p></p><p><em>"Lyana was..."</em> he sighs, leaning against the lectern and watching Liaden work. <em>"She was my best friend. There were other women in my life after her, I suppose, but Lyana was the only one who ever captured my heart. But I never knew she had a child at all, much less mine. I suppose... I suppose it was very like her, to not wish to part me from my destiny. Perhaps she heard the stories of my exploits, of the people I was helping, and decided to withhold Liaden's existence. Or as Lia herself says, simply never had a way to tell me. I was always on the move as a young man, and as the years passed, <span style="color: rgb(97, 189, 109)">my reports to the other paladins <u>became</u> less and less</span> frequent."</em></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="FuHyBi69, post: 445421, member: 43874"] When talking to Brother Sanders about Liaden, there is a grammar error in the third paragraph [B]The Original-[/B] [I]"Lyana was..."[/I] he sighs, leaning against the lectern and watching Liaden work. [I]"She was my best friend. There were other women in my life after her, I suppose, but Lyana was the only one who ever captured my heart. But I never knew she had a child at all, much less mine. I suppose... I suppose it was very like her, to not wish to part me from my destiny. Perhaps she heard the stories of my exploits, of the people I was helping, and decided to withhold Liaden's existence. Or as Lia herself says, simply never had a way [B]to[/B] tell me. I was always on the move as a young man, and as the years passed, [I][COLOR=rgb(184, 49, 47)]my reports to the other paladins [U]become[/U] less and less[/COLOR][/I] frequent."[/I] [B]My Alteration-[/B] [I]"Lyana was..."[/I] he sighs, leaning against the lectern and watching Liaden work. [I]"She was my best friend. There were other women in my life after her, I suppose, but Lyana was the only one who ever captured my heart. But I never knew she had a child at all, much less mine. I suppose... I suppose it was very like her, to not wish to part me from my destiny. Perhaps she heard the stories of my exploits, of the people I was helping, and decided to withhold Liaden's existence. Or as Lia herself says, simply never had a way to tell me. I was always on the move as a young man, and as the years passed, [COLOR=rgb(97, 189, 109)]my reports to the other paladins [U]became[/U] less and less[/COLOR] frequent."[/I] [/QUOTE]
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