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[0.7.20]+[0.7.21] +[0.7.23] Grammar Mistakes and Sentence Format Suggestions
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<blockquote data-quote="FuHyBi69" data-source="post: 445371" data-attributes="member: 43874"><p>When running into Berwyn the first time there is a grammar mistake in the fourth paragraph</p><p></p><p><strong>The Original-</strong></p><p></p><p>It takes a moment of sizing up to determine the dogfolk's gender, but the bulge just slightly tenting his black robes gives it away pretty easily despite the half-breed's almost girly appearance. <span style="color: rgb(184, 49, 47)">His cloak seems to <u>flows</u> around a wide set of hips and plush thighs</span>, while his narrow shoulders and the soft features of his face also lend to a more effeminate appearance.</p><p></p><p><strong>My Alteration-</strong></p><p>It takes a moment of sizing up to determine the dogfolk's gender, but the bulge just slightly tenting his black robes gives it away pretty easily despite the half-breed's almost girly appearance. <span style="color: rgb(97, 189, 109)">His cloak seems to <u>flow</u> around a wide set of hips and plush thighs</span>, while his narrow shoulders and the soft features of his face also lend to a more effeminate appearance.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="FuHyBi69, post: 445371, member: 43874"] When running into Berwyn the first time there is a grammar mistake in the fourth paragraph [B]The Original-[/B] It takes a moment of sizing up to determine the dogfolk's gender, but the bulge just slightly tenting his black robes gives it away pretty easily despite the half-breed's almost girly appearance. [COLOR=rgb(184, 49, 47)]His cloak seems to [U]flows[/U] around a wide set of hips and plush thighs[/COLOR], while his narrow shoulders and the soft features of his face also lend to a more effeminate appearance. [B]My Alteration-[/B] It takes a moment of sizing up to determine the dogfolk's gender, but the bulge just slightly tenting his black robes gives it away pretty easily despite the half-breed's almost girly appearance. [COLOR=rgb(97, 189, 109)]His cloak seems to [U]flow[/U] around a wide set of hips and plush thighs[/COLOR], while his narrow shoulders and the soft features of his face also lend to a more effeminate appearance. [/QUOTE]
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