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[0.7.20]+[0.7.21] +[0.7.23] Grammar Mistakes and Sentence Format Suggestions
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<blockquote data-quote="FuHyBi69" data-source="post: 445060" data-attributes="member: 43874"><p>When first entering the Chapel of Velun in Hawkthorne there is a grammar mistake in the first paragraph</p><p></p><p><strong>The Original-</strong></p><p></p><p>You step through the <span style="color: rgb(184, 49, 47)">doors of chapel</span>, entering a sanctuary of stone made warm and inviting by tapestries covering its stark walls and dozens of potted flowers growing in the windowsills. Several semi-circular wooden pews are arranged facing a central altar in the middle of the temple, a large stone edifice arrayed with statues of the seven Living Gods of Savarra. Each deity's statue holds a colored candle, and stares beatifically across the pews.</p><p></p><p><strong>My Alteration-</strong></p><p></p><p>You step through the <span style="color: rgb(97, 189, 109)">doors of the chapel</span>, entering a sanctuary of stone made warm and inviting by tapestries covering its stark walls and dozens of potted flowers growing in the windowsills. Several semi-circular wooden pews are arranged facing a central altar in the middle of the temple, a large stone edifice arrayed with statues of the seven Living Gods of Savarra. Each deity's statue holds a colored candle, and stares beatifically across the pews.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="FuHyBi69, post: 445060, member: 43874"] When first entering the Chapel of Velun in Hawkthorne there is a grammar mistake in the first paragraph [B]The Original-[/B] You step through the [COLOR=rgb(184, 49, 47)]doors of chapel[/COLOR], entering a sanctuary of stone made warm and inviting by tapestries covering its stark walls and dozens of potted flowers growing in the windowsills. Several semi-circular wooden pews are arranged facing a central altar in the middle of the temple, a large stone edifice arrayed with statues of the seven Living Gods of Savarra. Each deity's statue holds a colored candle, and stares beatifically across the pews. [B]My Alteration-[/B] You step through the [COLOR=rgb(97, 189, 109)]doors of the chapel[/COLOR], entering a sanctuary of stone made warm and inviting by tapestries covering its stark walls and dozens of potted flowers growing in the windowsills. Several semi-circular wooden pews are arranged facing a central altar in the middle of the temple, a large stone edifice arrayed with statues of the seven Living Gods of Savarra. Each deity's statue holds a colored candle, and stares beatifically across the pews. [/QUOTE]
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