When giving Tarah & Kavi the first pregnancy announcement, "apothecaries" should be "apothecary's" or "apothecaries'" and "half way" should be "halfway:"
Extra comma after the hyphen:
"Hawkethorne" should be capitalized:
When entering their home for the Tarah-Milky event, same as above, should be "apothecary's" or "apothecaries'":
Missing period after "at all:"
Missing apostrophes in "that's" and "wouldn't:"
Comma after "course" should be a period:
Extra comma after the hyphen:
"Hawkethorne" should be capitalized:
When entering their home for the Tarah-Milky event, same as above, should be "apothecary's" or "apothecaries'":
Missing period after "at all:"
Missing apostrophes in "that's" and "wouldn't:"
Comma after "course" should be a period: