In [Bed Cuddles], a missing paragraph break after "intertwined:"
In same, a missing period after "pouts:"
In [Bath Cuddles], extra set of quotation marks and missing italics on Tarah's first line of dialogue:
In same, should be "flatterer:"
In same, missing period after "woosh" (within both sets of quotation marks):
In [Beyond Cuddles], period after "thinking" should be a question mark (or exclamation point):
In same, missing period after [Tarah Nickname], "do" should be "due," and "Frost Marches" should be capitalized, as a proper name:
Thank you!!
In same, a missing period after "pouts:"
In [Bath Cuddles], extra set of quotation marks and missing italics on Tarah's first line of dialogue:
In same, should be "flatterer:"
In same, missing period after "woosh" (within both sets of quotation marks):
In [Beyond Cuddles], period after "thinking" should be a question mark (or exclamation point):
In same, missing period after [Tarah Nickname], "do" should be "due," and "Frost Marches" should be capitalized, as a proper name:
Thank you!!
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