In [Doggystyle], should add a closing apostrophe/quotation mark after bitch, to finish her thinking to herself:
![Screen Shot 2024-08-15 at 10.24.56 PM.png Screen Shot 2024-08-15 at 10.24.56 PM.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/36/36445-46bd910b513ffd8f4297f26b68e2f3a8.jpg)
"Ontop" should be "on top:"
![Screen Shot 2024-08-15 at 10.29.16 PM.png Screen Shot 2024-08-15 at 10.29.16 PM.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/36/36446-d3c25b4d653803a83d51ca3fcfc31f3e.jpg)
Comma after "cowed" should be a semicolon, I think:
![Screen Shot 2024-08-15 at 10.31.14 PM.png Screen Shot 2024-08-15 at 10.31.14 PM.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/36/36447-7d6958c59da2e94f6ccde484350ffb92.jpg)
In [Ride and Love], "you" should be lowercase:
![Screen Shot 2024-08-15 at 10.31.14 PM.png Screen Shot 2024-08-15 at 10.31.14 PM.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/36/36448-7d6958c59da2e94f6ccde484350ffb92.jpg)
Missing space after "response" and before the em dash:
![Screen Shot 2024-08-15 at 10.36.27 PM.png Screen Shot 2024-08-15 at 10.36.27 PM.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/36/36449-1ce48410a48db117d703c8a0c3c92f3b.jpg)
![Screen Shot 2024-08-15 at 10.24.56 PM.png Screen Shot 2024-08-15 at 10.24.56 PM.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/36/36445-46bd910b513ffd8f4297f26b68e2f3a8.jpg)
"Ontop" should be "on top:"
![Screen Shot 2024-08-15 at 10.29.16 PM.png Screen Shot 2024-08-15 at 10.29.16 PM.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/36/36446-d3c25b4d653803a83d51ca3fcfc31f3e.jpg)
Hmm. This champ's dick got too big
Comma after "cowed" should be a semicolon, I think:
![Screen Shot 2024-08-15 at 10.31.14 PM.png Screen Shot 2024-08-15 at 10.31.14 PM.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/36/36447-7d6958c59da2e94f6ccde484350ffb92.jpg)
In [Ride and Love], "you" should be lowercase:
![Screen Shot 2024-08-15 at 10.31.14 PM.png Screen Shot 2024-08-15 at 10.31.14 PM.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/36/36448-7d6958c59da2e94f6ccde484350ffb92.jpg)
Missing space after "response" and before the em dash:
![Screen Shot 2024-08-15 at 10.36.27 PM.png Screen Shot 2024-08-15 at 10.36.27 PM.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/36/36449-1ce48410a48db117d703c8a0c3c92f3b.jpg)