In [Doggystyle], should add a closing apostrophe/quotation mark after bitch, to finish her thinking to herself:
"Ontop" should be "on top:"
Comma after "cowed" should be a semicolon, I think:
In [Ride and Love], "you" should be lowercase:
Missing space after "response" and before the em dash:
"Ontop" should be "on top:"
Hmm. This champ's dick got too big
Comma after "cowed" should be a semicolon, I think:
In [Ride and Love], "you" should be lowercase:
Missing space after "response" and before the em dash: