[0.7.18] Intro Scene Typos

[ghostwriter207]

This one's not so much a typo as a bit of an oddity - the narration uses the British spelling of gray, then the American a few paragraphs later.


This should say "cradling the girl's head," not "hand." There's also a slight inconsistency with describing his fur as white when it was described previously as gray, though that's something of a nitpick.


Accidental word deletion - should be "handing it off."


Another American vs British English inconsistency. If there's a main one this game is supposed to use, perhaps these instances should be flipped to reflect that. (The first comes from the first screen after character creation, while the second is two screens later, when a White Mage PC heals Cait's head wound.)


Image depicts which tile triggers this dialogue - I suspect that's supposed to be "baring" its breasts, not "bearing."


Only one mage-cultist in this scene.

 

[ghostwriter207]

Given that the narration never describes this cultist being lupine, I assume this is the human woman of the three, in which case she should be wielding a staff, not a knife.


Another British English spelling sneaks in.


Drinking the Blue Potion during the tutorial if you don't have a penis already. "Glans" misspelling.


This is probably supposed to be "sinks down." "Slink" technically refers to stealthy movements.

 

[SmithEK]

Does it truly matter if they use British spelt words? I use mom even though I'm British.

 

[teawolf]

It's good work to flag it.

 

[ghostwriter207]

Does it truly matter if they use British spelt words? I use mom even though I'm British.

It doesn't matter which version they choose to use. I'm only calling it out because it goes back and forth between British and American spellings in the same scene.

 

[teawolf]

Should be sorted, except for:

• Leaving "white" in Garth's description;
• The scene inconsistencies (for writer);
• "slinks" could be Cait characterization, leaving as-is.