[0.7.15] TarahQuest typos + Tarah Talks continuity bug

[teawolf]

When Kavi asks the champion to find her daughter, missing quotation mark after "dear:"


When searching for a huntress in the "Help" route, missing "as" before "still" (since it's followed by "as she can manage"):


Same page, not sure if this is a typo or not, but I think this should be "bimboish"?


When watching Tarah and the huntress--for clarity, I'd suggest changing the second "she" to "Tarah," but maybe stylistic:


Suggest changing "she dutifully..." to "Tarah dutifully..." for clarity:


Since Tarah is the prior referent, I'd suggest changing "she finds" to "the woman" or "the huntress:"


Missing period after "commands:"


When returning to Kavi on the "Help" route, "did" should be lowercase:


When talking to Tarah about her statuettes, "Keros" should be capitalized:


If the PC didn't romance Tarah, the end of the statuette discussion still assumes they did with a kiss and hand-holding:

 

[teawolf]

After fighting Tarah, missing quotation marks after "fighting:"


When asking Tarah if she'd prefer not to fight, missing apostrophe before "'Cause:"


In [Flash Dick], a bequest is an item in a will, so should be "request," I think:


In [Flash Her Tits], missing apostrophe before "'Cause:"


In [Animals], missing apostrophe on "mom's:"


In same, "Pupperidge" should be capitalized:


In [Rock Paper Scissors]-->[Scissors], comma after "squee" should go inside the quotation marks:


In [Challenge Duel], "I" should be capitalized:


In same, if Tarah wins, missing apostrophe after "clownin':"

 

[teawolf]

In the second page of [Kiss & Cuddle], missing period after "pouts:"


In [Missionary]-->[Take Her], comma after "in" should be a question mark:


Continuity question--I truly can't tell if Tarah is supposed to be fucking the PC in the ass or vagina for this scene? Most of the language could go either way, but playing a herm, and there are both references to Tarah in Champ's ass, as well as to the Champ's lube and to impregnation.
Suggesting PIV:

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Suggesting anal:



Period after "unfair" should be a comma:


Back "downstairs" or "down the stairs:"

 

[teawolf]

In [Missionary]-->[Top Her], "bodies" should be "body's:"


In Cowgirl-->Ride Her, missing comma after "that:"


In Cowgirl-->Get Ridden, missing period after "up:"


In same, missing ending quotation marks after "want me:"


In same, I think there might be a cumVol parser error, visible at "your seed / gushing spurts"--this champ should be the not quite as bombastic version:

 

[teawolf]

Sorted, except for:
- Statuette discussion kiss & hand-holding;
-PIV/Anal parser confusion in [Missionary]
-cumVol parser confusion in [Cowgirl]->[Get Ridden]