A. Manticore Girl
1. Bad End - typo (your -> you)
2. Bad End - typo (it's -> its)
3. Bad End - typo (the -> their)
4. Bad End - formatting (please -> Please)
B. Orc Village
1. Orc Breeder Bad End - typo (yo -> you)
C. Kitsune Den Bad Ends
1. Kitsune Transformation - I think typo? (to -> so)
2. Samurai Wife - missing word (might be better fate -> might be a better fate)
3. Samurai Wife - typo (of -> or)
4. KitBreeder - typo (a -> as)
5. KitBreeder - typo (amy -> any)
6. KitBreeder - I think it's either missing a comma or a word needs changing
D. Tollus Treatment Bad End
1. Typo (hodded -> hooded)
2. Not sure if this is missing a word or a word needs to be changed
E. Centaur Quest Bad Ends
1. Unitaur Male - Missing word <i think its feel>
F. Hornet Quest Bad Ends
1. Hive Wife - missing punctuation
G. Berwyn Tower
1. Matiha Defeat - missing punctuation
2. Matiha Defeat - Floating space <last period>
3. Matiha Defeat - typo (hand -> hang)
H. Abyssal Depths
1. Lureling Bad End - double word (the)
I. Catacombs
1. Synneva Bad End - double word (to -> it)
2. Atheldred Bad End - typo (in -> if)
J. Orc Quest
1. Tent Defeat - typo (your -> you)
You lie there like the fucktoy you are, blabbering incomprehensible praise to your alpha while your lock your [pc.legs] around her waist to make sure she floods your bowels with her spunk.
Her cock is just so wonderfully big. Its mighty length ensures every inch of your [pc.asshole] is introduced to her conquest while it’s bulky girth keeps your tailhole gaped and loose for future use.
Your [pc.hips] move on the own accord, unconsciously rocking your [pc.ass] against her cum covered tool and making the manticore growl pleasantly in your ear.
"I want to be your bitch! P-please, yes! please make me your bitch!"
1. Orc Breeder Bad End - typo (yo -> you)
"There yo go, baby sister," Hretha snorts. "[pc.name]'s made a real woman out of you. Just like us."
1. Kitsune Transformation - I think typo? (to -> so)
Sure, it shouldn't be strange to you at this point, but never before has such a transformation been to perversely pleasurable...
Sure, it might be better fate than having one's mind wiped and used as a shell of a body for a forest witch, but it's not very much so.
It's not merely his appearance of the way he's dressed, though he's something of a prettyboy.
Your dogboy looks down at you, a hint of disgust mixing in with the uncertainty on his face a he studies your nubile slut form.
Berwyn's hips tremble against your buttcheeks a his release mounts; in your mind's eye, you can picture perfectly his seed as it rises through his twitching cock and explodes inside of you.
The poor catboy looks ready to bolt amy moment, but his feet are firmly rooted to the floor.
The kitsune see no need to restrain or imprison you — you can't move very fast anyway with your kit-filled belly, and even if you could the will to escape's evaporated completely somewhere in the middle of your second pregnancy.
1. Typo (hodded -> hooded)
Surrounding you are dozens upon dozens of hodded shapes, all ready to pounce should you somehow affect your freedom. Looks like someone's overcompensating here,
2. Not sure if this is missing a word or a word needs to be changed
Did you know her when you were... in the before time?
1. Unitaur Male - Missing word <i think its feel>
When your mind comes back together you can <feel> it's different in some unknowable way.
F. Hornet Quest Bad Ends
1. Hive Wife - missing punctuation
And then there’s a sharp, hot pain that digs into your asscheek... and a second, far larger one
G. Berwyn Tower
1. Matiha Defeat - missing punctuation
Then, giving you no time to adjust, it starts thrusting in and out of your sodden hole, leaving you crying out with pleasure as it tantilizes your inner walls
2. Matiha Defeat - Floating space <last period>
inside it almost in place as you let out muffled, pleasured cries. [pc.hasCock|At the same time, your [pc.cocks] erupt[s|s] into a fountain of [pc.cum] as your [pc.hasBalls|balls empty|prostate empties]].
3. Matiha Defeat - typo (hand -> hang)
As you hand there in the air, held aloft by a mass of tentacles as you're fucked by even more of them, you start to think
H. Abyssal Depths
1. Lureling Bad End - double word (the)
You struggle, trying to pry yourself free of the gelatinous mass, but the the chill emanating from the clingy substance intensifies, permeating skin, flesh and bone... and of course, your mind.
I. Catacombs
1. Synneva Bad End - double word (to -> it)
A harem befitting a queen. Ohh, that has a nice ring to to: Queen Synneva — I mean, Etheryn. Honestly, there's not much difference."
2. Atheldred Bad End - typo (in -> if)
I'm going to need heirs in we're to rebuild our kingdom, to return it to its former glory.
J. Orc Quest
1. Tent Defeat - typo (your -> you)
The orcess throws her staff aside and falls on your like a beast in heat, tearing at your clothes until your [pc.cock] is bobbing free in the air.
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