1. These screenshots are from the scene that pops up after choosing to tie him up.
Should be capitalized.
Extra space there.
2. These are from tie him up-->tease him.
The "hoseshiny," part should be separated either by a space or use another " - " in between.
"Fellate." Missing an extra L.
Missing a comma there.
Missing a comma there.
A quote mark from a whole new sentence. It needs to be capitalized.
3. This screenshot is from tie him up-->tease him-->Now Him.
"Continuous." It's misspelled.
4. This screenshot is from tie him up-->tease him-->leave him.
Extra space there.
Should be capitalized.
Extra space there.
2. These are from tie him up-->tease him.
The "hoseshiny," part should be separated either by a space or use another " - " in between.
"Fellate." Missing an extra L.
Missing a comma there.
Missing a comma there.
A quote mark from a whole new sentence. It needs to be capitalized.
3. This screenshot is from tie him up-->tease him-->Now Him.
"Continuous." It's misspelled.
4. This screenshot is from tie him up-->tease him-->leave him.
Extra space there.
