(0.5.7) Berwyn Quest typos

[luciel1331]

1. These screenshots are from when Astrea comes to PC and choose to take her to Berwyn. These types only happen if pc is a bimbo.

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2. This screenshot is from when pc enters Matiha's place (pre-maze).

"courses." The veins should course through the bricks.

 

[luciel1331]

3. This screenshot is when pc confronts Matiha and chooses to rush Matiha.

Those highlighted words need to be separated.

4. This screenshot is from when Berwyn breaks the crystal and Matiha turns to eldritch form.

Orange scale? The picture doesn't match that. Perhaps change the text to black to match the picture?

5. This screenshot is from when PC confronts Matiha and decides to rush Elexis.

Should be unitalicized.

6. This screenshot is from when PC defeats Matiha and decides what to do with her. Extra space there.

7. These screenshots are from when PC decides to talk to Matiha after getting out of the dungeon.

Should be unitalizied (left screenshot). Whenever pc talks, it's never italicized (see right sides for example).

The highlighted parts should be unitalicized and should not be in quotes. Whenever pc talks, it's never in italics or in quotes.

8. This screenshot is from when PC comes back to Astraea after they decided Matiha's fate.

It says the middle of the day even though if you see the clock on the right, it's late night.

 

[luciel1331]

9. These screenshots are from after talking to Astraea again. Berwyn talks to PC about how he reconfigured his form and gives PC the wizard hat. All of these screenshots that are highlighted misgenders Berwyn. In these parts, I choose Berwyn to have no vagina, a flat chest, and the biggest cock. It says Berwyn on the screenshots as well.

 

[luciel1331]

10. These screenshots are from the scene that occurs after beating the dungeon and Berwyn explains how he can change his body.

Berwyn mentions himself having big tits (1st and 2nd screenshot) even though Berwyn here only has A tits (3rd screenshot).

11. This screenshot is right after the player finishes deciding how Berwyn looks.

So the chest size inconsistency continues. Berwyn here has A-cup tits and the highlighted description says his clothes can barely contain his A-cup tits. Wrong description there.