[0.4.5] Farrah Dance

Kizrah

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Jan 17, 2021
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Cait is mentioned in the Dance, but as you can see, Cait isn't with me. Paragraph is highlighted.1627245002007.png
 
Dec 18, 2018
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I unfortunately cannot add anything to why Cait may or may not be there, but I noticed in your highlighted paragraph, on the 2nd to last line, it should say "- drowns out the music." instead of "- downs out the music.". 2 lines above that, and this may just be me editing things too heavily in my mind, but a comma after other might be a good addition as well. This would make it "- away from each other, only to come back -".