I unfortunately cannot add anything to why Cait may or may not be there, but I noticed in your highlighted paragraph, on the 2nd to last line, it should say "- drowns out the music." instead of "- downs out the music.". 2 lines above that, and this may just be me editing things too heavily in my mind, but a comma after other might be a good addition as well. This would make it "- away from each other, only to come back -".