[0.4.16] Missing space

Alypia

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Apr 22, 2016
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Missing period and space in the non-high-Confidence version of Etheryn's Big Spoon cuddle scene.

There are, of course, plenty of reasons to hold her tight apart from her pleasant temperature[etheryn.highConfidence
| — they're the kinds of reasons that words struggle to convey. Touch, though: touch does a much better job. She squeezes your hands as they reach around her; you smooch her shoulders and her neck in return. And her long, delicate ears get plenty of rubs and kisses of their own.
|Like you said to her, [pc.isDK|you're the one in charge, a[pc.ra dragon|n actual] dragon guarding your hoard; she's yours, and no one else's, and when your arms are around her you can feel that sense of ownership in your bones|she's a sweet thing who deserves some tender loving care and a little calmness in her life, as no other [pc.manWoman] has done for her before].
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It should read:

There are, of course, plenty of reasons to hold her tight apart from her pleasant temperature[etheryn.highConfidence
| — they're the kinds of reasons that words struggle to convey. Touch, though: touch does a much better job. She squeezes your hands as they reach around her; you smooch her shoulders and her neck in return. And her long, delicate ears get plenty of rubs and kisses of their own.
|. Like you said to her, [pc.isDK|you're the one in charge, a[pc.ra dragon|n actual] dragon guarding your hoard; she's yours, and no one else's, and when your arms are around her you can feel that sense of ownership in your bones|she's a sweet thing who deserves some tender loving care and a little calmness in her life, as no other [pc.manWoman] has done for her before].
]
Error is present in original writing. My apologies.