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Pretty sure you can check back on previous editing as the author by clicking the Changes Since button and selecting a version from a previous date, at least to see where they were. Otherwise, I guess the next time I go through I can add a comment like, 'Sigh...maybe a [silly|twunk] here...'

I am not going anywhere near that coffee table until it cools down. Kidding. As an editor, it always amuses me how people like to arrange their adjectives in a sentence... strangely. Amused. Strangely amused.

Simple answer is probably because Ryn is such a wonderfully written and detailed character and with such amazing interactions that readers will always want more because they feel a connection. Equally simple answer is that most readers want to impregnate everything.

I thought boreal elves reproduced like the facehuggers from Aliens. Are you telling me all the time I've spent with her thighs wrapped around my head and her ovipositor down my throat was a waste?

You can always have it as a [silly] here or there.

I think he uses enchanted knuckledusters or knuckles. I don't see why those couldn't be made.

I KNOW RIGHT! Why doesn't this game let us be a person that ignores the setting, society, and rules and go around punching people whenever we want? Likely ending up either locked in the stocks for some period of time, causing us to lose skills and experience from inactivity and lack of...

I read through the latest version for Varenyz. Very nice work. Lots of improvements and additions since the original. I am not a great fan of 'twunk' (and now that's... in my search history apparently), but I can see how it works or fits, and it's not too overused. I like the effort and...

Oh, yeah, Zo is incredible. Granted, her artwork is a huge factor when I see her. She's like "Okay" in her robe, but once that comes off, it's like, "Damn!", but, talking about the writing... when I started my Dark Knight character and had to not help... It just kills me in my heart knowing...

This is fair, but devil's advocate, maybe it's not 'your scale' but hers. Maybe she's just romantically inclined or feels a connection with you and it's 'her scale' and judgement based on your choice to willingly have sex her that makes her (possibly deluded or misguided) feelings of a perceived...

Milk Stinger 1. Should be 'your' instead of 'her'. 2. Okay, not really a typo, so I don't expect you to fix it without B's permission. It's just that her hands are clad in black chitin. I don't see them turning white. I could see maybe 'you imagine if they weren't clad in black chitin they...

You could, use it as an RP method for playing a redeemed Champion. I believe a Steam achievement even requires that (redeeming yourself from full Corruption). Other than , I think you're safe on most fronts.

I hope you're feeling better and good to see you've been keeping up with the writing. I do get paid for editing (though I don't generally charge for free projects or things people don't charge for). Luckily you don't have to worry about it. It's true that most times I am shortening, trimming, or...

I think overburdened is typically acquired by your pregnancy. As it advances, it affects your abilities (in some manner) detrimentally.

It's more likely that Lumia would have a valkyrie act as a surrogate and likely have the child have the genes of the parents.

I always thought that after you finished talking with Evergreen Cait just brought it up and Champ had the option to pay for it (impregnate or get pregnant) If you don't, I think she trades a prayer book. I am not sure if you need to have had sex with her or not (spoiler alert, I always have by...

In a fantasy game, there's probably a creature where it could work potentially with less ick or pushback than normal. For instance, a slime-creature imitating a humanoid form might 'cling' a little more as you pull out or something. I agree with most others that the lack of such things is...

Komari At least one of these may be true. 1. or 2. or 3. Carmen At least one of these may be true. 1. or 2. or 3.

I would recommend being a White Mage. They get Healing Hands which heals themselves whenever they heal another, up to half their Spellpower, so getting that the higher the better. Your Willpower will be the stat that affects that, I believe. Then consider using Healing and Group Healing spells...

Garth would not tolerate it. Nor would the townsfolk. And she's not really the kind you can keep under wraps and trust to be subtle and lay low. It might work in reverse...but Gweyr might want her maid outfit back.