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Not sure I'd say it's unwarranted. I mean, it's not one author for the entire game dividing their attention. It's from someone who's working on kitsune stuff and they actually are doing the work. I really like the depth and detail of the Kitsune stuff. There's a whole lot of different characters...

I think I'd like some way to meet Evelyn. There was a scene where two ladies had their door open and I just politely passed it by. Apparently that's the only way to ever meet her. I don't mind missing things, but there's usually a warning when you're going to do something you can't undo. I can...

[Sex with Hellhound (Scene appears when entering statue room)] The period is on a whole new line by itself. back and forth across the hellhound woman’s crotch , The comma is on a whole new line by itself. It should probably be 'sweat' instead of 'skin'. I know they're both hot, but not...

[Sex; Fuck her pussy] Not a typo, but the way the scene is written indicates that the writer wants the speech to be italicized, so this sentence should be. [Sex; Fuck her pussy; Just watch] Should be a space between 'reaches' and 'her'

[Sex; Assfuck; Mouth (take load in mouth)] Should be 'making your ass gape'. [Sex; Assfuck; Face (take load in face)] Should be 'your gaping asshole'. Should be 'closed eyelids'. [Sex; Keep Fighting (with pussy and buttplug)] Should be 'raise' instead of 'rise' [Sex; Keep Fighting...

[Sex; I want to fuck; Assfuck] 'approaching' is misspelled. Should at 'it' to the end of the sentence. 'deserves' is misspelled. [Sex; I want to fuck; Assfuck; Ass(take load in ass)] Should be 'Lyla's' with an apostrophe s. Should be a space between 'sake,' and 'you'. Should be...

[Hang Out; Try for Kiss] Should be 'thighs'. [Sex; First time] Should be 'seven inch' From the rest of the way this scene is written, it seems like this part shouldn't be italicized. Maybe it wasn't closed properly in the previous line. 'feminine' is misspelled. Should be a space...

I almost always just Tease her into submission (well, as submissive as she gets).

[Fuck; Lap Ride] (in Wayfort) The word 'right' seems either out of place, or misspelled. Maybe it was meant to be 'ring', as in 'slamming into her forgiving ring' or 'inside her forgiving ring'. If it's meant to mean something else, like you slamming into her 'right as' your fingers dig into...

[Sex; Threesome with Cait; Double Titfuck] 'Another hungry pur and Cait leans in ...' Should be 'purr'. [Sex, Ride Her] '... moving up to grope at your breasts,adding to your pleasure.' Add a space between 'breasts,' and 'adding'. '... is enough to spur on a shuddering orgasm of your.'...

[Sex, Threesome with Cait, Ride Arona] Should be 'one of those big arms'. Should be 'both hands'. Should be 'just enough'. 'That big chest of her heaves ...' Should be 'hers' instead of 'her' 'Once pinch of Arona's coal-black teats ...' Should be 'One pinch' instead of 'Once pinch'.

[Appearance] 'Agnimitra' is misspelled. [Sex; Doggystyle] Should be 'them'

[New Year Celebration] Should be 'You look at bell and clapper alike' or 'at the' [Childbirth] Should be 'you can see'. [Talk > Keros:>] [The Sultan of Jassira story] It should be 'count the hairs on both your head and on my tail.' [Talk > Children > Kinu :>] Should be 'that' instead...

[Catching Aya in the cellar] 'Mother's' should be apostrophe s instead of s apostrophe. [Catching Aya > Don't Let Go] Should be 'resolute as it's ever'. [Kinu illness] Should be 'lying on the ground on a futon' or 'lying upon the ground on a futon' or 'lying on the ground upon a futon'...

Kasyrra '... the slift shift ...' Should it be 'slight shift'?

I think the later scenes should reveal that she is totally Baba Yaga. Saggy tits, gnarled teeth, crooked claw-like fingernails, and wiry, gray pubes and all. And then she steals one of your babies... or has one of your babies. Okay... maybe that should be set aside for a dream scene.

I like the Summoning Circle idea. So far I've only been able to summon my Wolf Spirit and play with it, but I do think a few other summons that had some dialogue or just interaction when called in non-combat situations would be nice. Intelligent ones could pass on some lore, others could...

I really like altering the game world, or more specifically, how your actions affect the game world. Upgrading of the nursery, building of the temple,, the potential repair of Wayfort. Choices that affect ease of movement. Maybe finding and hiring an out of work construction crew (possibly...

You massaged and milked them down to a more manageable size. Nice guy (or girl, or both) that you are. It was probably intended to be 'Champion of Winter City' but got confused.

[Shearing wool > Lapfuck] [cont] '... scratching the back of head gently ...' Should be 'scratching the back of her head gently'. 'Well, you just don’t want to pushher too far is all.' Should be a space between 'push' and 'her'. '... only recede into fear when she sees the brutish fury...