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  1. Ace Hangman

    [First Draft] Fabius Gripus; Ordinary Citizen

    All fair, he's all those things (well, not an actual uncle). Just like anyone else, being a former soldier is not his whole personality, but it should always be a factor in how he might respond. Now he's just an old man who lives a relatively good and leisurely life, helping out people around...
  2. Ace Hangman

    Why do a lot of people dislike the kitsune so much?

    But, maybe she could teach and help Aya with her primal feelings. Train her to become a force for calm, meditative structure and discipline instead of slowly transforming into what will likely become some foxen equivalent of a werewolf, prowling the forests with her bestial maw, fangs, and claws...
  3. Ace Hangman

    Why do a lot of people dislike the kitsune so much?

    Are you referring to Nash? The corrupt merchant in the Outskirts? Assuming you are, I never saw Kiyoko's comment, I must not have had her in party the times I first met. I assume anything she said would likely be colored by the fact that he's clearly corrupt and all his wares are equally so. She...
  4. Ace Hangman

    [Editing] June picnic

    I will start looking through it and see if I can catch any typos or offer suggestions. As for June, I have no insight either. Other than I know he has an unnamed brother (who was butt-plugged with hornet eggs at the start of your adventure). Wsan would be the one who would know. That's why I...
  5. Ace Hangman

    [First Draft] Fabius Gripus; Ordinary Citizen

    That might be the case, but fortunately we're not at the submitted stage even. I probably should have been more clear in the Title, or message, or in the document itself. This is just the chassis and framework to gauge whether an NPC like this would even be looked on favorably or as a net...
  6. Ace Hangman

    Was best Girl Zhara this entire time?!

    And also not only takes brown leaf contraceptives but in order to even have sex with her she requires the Champ to be either sterile or on sterility powder as well. And probably also can't be pregnant at the time, because she's "Not a fan."
  7. Ace Hangman

    Why do a lot of people dislike the kitsune so much?

    I think they're pretty chill overall, since almost no outsider is ever allowed in the den, but I think I know what you're implying. Even then, I think they're mostly pretty chill with you. Some interactions I kind of thought about was, after Raphael's attack on the compound, asking Zo to move...
  8. Ace Hangman

    holy crap this is hard!

    Have you considered the possibility that she's got nothing to hide and is telling the truth?
  9. Ace Hangman

    Question. Rescue drifta from the lupines.

    I am fully expecting a Silly parser during that scene along the lines of: 'If there's one thing I'm diving for... it's a nice box!" or 'Here I go again... diving after a wet box!'
  10. Ace Hangman

    Question. Rescue drifta from the lupines.

    You know... sometimes when you're playing the bad guy... there's those moments... where you're like, "What am I doing? Am I really... seriously doing this?"" And then I tell myself... "The staff needs me to do this! I'm the editor and I need to [blank] the puppy [blank] [blank] [blank] and then...
  11. Ace Hangman

    Question. Rescue drifta from the lupines.

    I have also let her be captured on this newest play-thru (Dark Knight). Drifa is not a character that gets pushed into any goo that I know of. That might be Azzy and Laiden you're thinking of. To spoiler stuff: The easiest way here would be Or you could use the SPOILER and /SPOILER commands...
  12. Ace Hangman

    What content would you like added?

    Aww, but they need a little TLC too!
  13. Ace Hangman

    [First Draft] Fabius Gripus; Ordinary Citizen

    Did I write 'non-sexable'? Pretty sure that's not even a word... I must have meant... 'nonsensical'. Yeaah... that's the ticket! Completely mad, like a fox... like a kitsune... fox. Yeah, he's... totally gonna be sexy-fun-times... it's just... gated behind a dialogue challenge that I haven't...
  14. Ace Hangman

    [First Draft] Fabius Gripus; Ordinary Citizen

    This is my first attempt at writing a character. I am more of an editor than a writer, but I want to learn more about variables and parsers and I figured this might be a good way to practice and get feedback. I tried to intersperse a few different parsers in there and try some different spacing...
  15. Ace Hangman

    The Corrupted elves I spared aren't in the Wayfort.

    Yeah, checked my dungeon just now and didn't see any mention of any elves either, just Alissa and demonic dragoon. I can see them not being expanded on, but I don't see any mention of them being there in the description. I wouldn't have even suspected I had any one else in there.
  16. Ace Hangman

    Your Gripes With CoC2

    Yeah, both methods are accepted and correct. As long as it's understandable and clear and the scene works. You typically would use the non-dialogue part if you're inserting thoughts or observations that the PC should know and don't want to have to then reiterate or repeat or parse those thoughts...
  17. Ace Hangman

    Ashlander Acquisition

    You're right! It was all a lie or a misconception! Anyone could remove the Amazon Spear, they just all believed the story was true and no one ever tried. I'm starting to think that's just an excuse the creators made because they just didn't want to have to write options for every single...
  18. Ace Hangman

    The Corrupted elves I spared aren't in the Wayfort.

    Maybe they went to Winter City with the other elves. They probably aren't demonic or shapeshifters enough to escape normal cells? Your dungeon is small for holding a lot of people and its probably used for Alissa and the Dragon Knight because they are magical or demons and could escape a normal...
  19. Ace Hangman

    Ashlander Acquisition

    In my opinion and purely as philosophical exercise, for royalty purposes (specifically regarding the Spear's royalty requirements in this discussion), I tend to have the same line of thinking as SylcarenBloodmoon. • I would offer that they'd have have to be a ruler of King/Queen status or a...
  20. Ace Hangman

    Ashlander Acquisition

    Shame about Phyria, I could almost imagine myself writing a Phyria option myself, since she's low-impact on most story points... Probably wouldn't even need a new portrait, alter some combat moves when summoned, maybe a variable in some dream scenes. Maybe she pulls the spear... changes and...