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I can't say that this is how it's coded, but the public doc listed it (long, long ago): So it might be the corruption part if this is accurate.

Looks good to me. If I had a comment, I could only say to check for 'Lumia' and 'goddess' and just make sure they aren't overused too soon together. If you get a 'Lumia's screams', 'Lumia's milk,' or 'Lumia's skin' or something when you do a CTRL-F and see them highlighted too closely, just try...

Because she's not a good girl! You know what she did! She's a bad girl! Bad girl! Sleep at the foot of the bed!

I don't know what specifically increasing pay day income, maybe the Temple money goes there, or maybe making the harpies bandits instead of guards, but I don't think anything will make it happen in a week or two, so mostly it's just letting it pile up.

You could try: 1. Turn [silly] mode on? Click Wait or Sleep repeatedly and stop Withdrawing money? 2. Commission a dream scene where you swim in piles of coins when you sleep? 3. Realize that greed is a sin and ultimately the fleeting joy you get from luxuriating in a pile of metal that's...

It needed rewriting and work and polishing. It's just such a massive document and undertaking that the writer had to step away, since they've been working on it off an on over two years. It still needs a lot of looking over.

Read through it. Like valk42 said, adjust the bee mention, and the wasp mentions maybe, they aren't too egregious (at least I don't think anyone will come at you with a crab-knife). Other than some typos, I would say my only concern is the Titfuck scene. Obviously I assumed Champ was gonna be...

I didn't recall her stabbing herself either. I was worried I was mistaken and didn't want to have to play all the way back up to that section to be sure. I knew she stabbed Calise, but I thought maybe I had missed the Blade's exit in all the suprise. If she did, it would be the old, classic...

I was with you up until you mentioned Steele, maybe you meant 'Champ'? I can't help with Steele, never played TiTS.

That would probably be the easiest way. Especially when you have to deal with the blocks of pregStage parsers. Arranging or coloring them to make it easier on yourself (or indenting them) without worrying you're making it harder on others or worrying that you're removing something forever. It's...

Luma said to post this. He will get messages and still sees comments in the docs. Obviously Clementine herself is not his work, and she's available for anyone as far as I know. If you have interest in Acacia or a scene for her (not that she's in game), just let him or I know. He says if you can...

See, I on the other hand (which means this only applies to me), have never gotten that impression. Nothing she said ever led me to think she didn't like Champ or even love Champ. I just never got that. If she did say something mean or bad, I can't really give it much weight to all the other...

"This really isn't necessary, Father," Kinu says. "I am well aware of the Wayfort. I sometimes meet passing traders and some of your guardsman to barter for feeding. In disguise, of course." "No," you tell her. "I just want you to see that there's more to your barbaric, old father than a...

Finished reading through your Sayumi Ishida doc. She feels believable. She talks a little differently, but then there's a Miko and Mai who talk like... I don't even know. I know they're already submitted, but I left some notes. I hope they help. Not sure that reviewers like looking at docs while...

It's all fun and games until Barania sends up a patrol of Fleeced Anal Police and you're surrounded by F.A.P.pers.

Read through it. Seems pretty polished to me. I didn't spot many typos or grammar errors or anything. I can't condone such depraved debauchery to my sweet, darling of a Baranian... but it looks good.

Of course what you were is important. If you grew up as an orc, you will have orcish feelings inside and things an orc would know or have in perspective. If you were born an orc... you probably get dizzy at the thought of a massive longboat, whether you look like a demon now or not. You probably...

Is that how you interpreted it? I viewed it more as a "Hey buddy, you alright? It's okay, let's get you up and get you another tray and some fries."

I assume it's because she's a phoenix, and likes fire, and that's about as close to home as she can be while she gets used to her new body (and the hellhound was there for playing with until her recent move to the Wayfort). Plus, as a flying character, her 'showing up' in the Frost Hound or...

Very evocative. I feel sorry for the innocent girl but... I am also a deviant pervert (allegedly). I probably would have added in some [dcb] or [pc.isDK] and had her being more aggressive, calling them pervert or deviant. Maybe add in a little more about how tight she is as the fist went in.