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  1. XBoxMaster131

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    Missing Space “It’s exhausting, Ms Steele,” she responds, looking up from her holopad with a sigh and a smile. “Getting fucked half the day, then editing all of it down into good content - it’s tough!But I wouldn’t change it for anything in the world.”
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    missing period in the ellipses When you finally finish cumming together, he gently lays down onto his bedding, allowing you to lay atop him with your dick still inside. You carefully extract yourself, your knot popping free, and give his butt a loving caress. “Love you, Vark.” He looks back...
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    extra comma Once you’ve hollowed him out, moulded him and stretched him to your needs,, you begin to beat a mild tempo against his meaty backside.
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    extra period Vark moves through the tight cinch, lathering your muscles in saliva., and what feels like half a foot of hot, flexible muscle settles in its new bed. He presses it against your prostate in the process of his exploration, and chuckles when you cry out. His tongue returns to the...
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    maybe swap pre with fountain, or place of in front of pre, either one works You can hear Anyxine sighing softly, starting to type again, getting back into her workflow as much as she can - though the staccato rhythm she’s keeping is slower and less steady than the lightning speed she’s...
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    perhaps put "and" before cynthis? imo, it would help the sentence flow much better. anslo, maybe remove the comma, but im not too sure about that one. When you’re finished you open your eyes to see Walt looking up, Cynthia looking down at the two of you with a teasing smirk.
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    Missing capitalization, and i think a few words missing as well? idk what happened “I also remember my first birthday quite fondly. Well, “birthday”, we were celebrating my first year since Emily and her crew found me. There were balloons, party hats, cake, candles, the whole shebang! There...
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    one missing period in an ellipses and a missing space “T-there’s also, t-the.. One of my-my...how I’ve got my little sis-No! I can’t tell that. I-I it’s too embarrassing...” Her voice certainly sounds embarrassed, but she’s gotta finish what she starts. A little encouragement and she’s back...
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    perhaps remove the first comma Your moans turn to gasps, as Blue kisses you, a heat starting to rise deep in your belly. Precum starts to seep from your twitching cockhead, dribbling along Blue’s brightly colored lips.
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    missing space You clearly feel as much as hear her moan in the back of her throat as she goes down on you, the cock-hungry ovir clearly loving sucking down on your mare-member. You notice her hand slip away from your spit-coated cock just as Blue’s blonde head lowers deep into your...
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    missing space Heading to the cockpit, you settle into the captain’s chair and set course for Tavros, planning to get Blue home right away.An hour later
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    whats the word for something that has been capitalized when it shouldnt be? well whatever it is, thats here “Whoooa.” The blonde ovir moves in closer, sticking her face so close to the pale woman you feel your butthole clench in concern. “You’re, like, super pretty... Boss, Isn’t she super...
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    maybe add "a" before "younger" Also, fr0sty, if youre seeing this, what the fuck were you smoking when you wrote all this dude? “And whose idea was it to take a break? HIS! He wanted to fuck real twenty-year-olds and not just someone who looked like one! So yeah! I fucked around a little...
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    another error
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    Some kinda error here. In possibly the best place it could be in
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    missing space after ellipses Pink snorts. “Smartass.” She shifts her gaze down to her codex, muting the music. “Alright then... Well, I never planned on having kids. Not because I didn’t like them or some shit, I just... never thought about it. And since my childhood was so...fucked, I had...
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    No paragraphs on Tarkus with Blue

    From what i can tell pretty much every one of greens scenes has this issue, so i just gave up the goat on it.
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    Random bracket. maybe leftover from coding? idk Swallowing hard, Ari seems to shrink down into her chair, as if trying to slip down into the cracks of the floor.}
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    Missing period in ellipses “Ahh, yes..” Scully nods, “Grandchildren! We’ve already quite a few, but...” he shifts his gaze past you, towards Ari. “We’re always looking for more.”
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    missing space “Lucky...” Gol turns away, once again disinterested.A few sets of eyes around the table glance around, silence setting in.