Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!

[PanzerGuitar00]

With the new legged Venus Pitcher, every single ellipses is missing the space that comes afterward, when applicable.

Im not gonna show them. Im sorry but it would literally drive me insane. just do a blanket check and place the spaces where they are needed.





also, missing period

The dryad’s tendrils come fast. You’re faster — throwing yourself clear as the crack splits the air where you were standing. She regards where she stands, tendrils slowly recoiling. “Hmph.” Then she’s gone, folding herself back into her pod with a final, decisive schlutch



maybe change "they" to "you"

There’s a package at your feet. You push it lightly with your foot, just enough to read the print: Estrobloom - bloom into the feminine flower they always deserved to be! You barely have time to register it when a rustling draws your attention.



maybe add a comma after "oh"

Oh this again. You already ran into a venus pitcher that tried this song and dance on you, and it worked so very, very well. Every erogenous zone on your body begins to tingle and engorge at the memory of your submission.

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

for some reason this is a plural, even though i only have one vagina.

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[PanzerGuitar00]

For some reason, after doing the Friendly Male Naleen sex scenes, it gives you THE MANGO status effect. no idea why that is.

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

missing period


“I suppose that’s preferable to provoking the Garden That Eats. But I can’t say I approve of engaging in such dishonorable practices as bartering”

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

ditto

You venture an opinion, commenting on how unusually chatty Venus is for a venus pitcher

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

i think an italics glitch procs in this scene

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[PanzerGuitar00]

missing period


“I suppose that’s preferable to provoking the Garden That Eats. But I can’t say I approve of engaging in such dishonorable practices as bartering”

anotha one

“For identification purposes,” the rahn explains softly, adjusting the arm of the device. “Try not to blink”

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

For the new venus Pitcher, maybe change to tooltip for if your dong is too big for the hypno sex, because i legit thought for a while that I needed like a tentacle dong or a tail cock or something for that scene before the idea to use condesol popped up

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[Jacques00]

Hopefully all fixed for the next release, up to this point.

At the milodan ritual cave, if you have wings, the rope "respawns". at least it does in my save. file included for testing. no idea if this happens if you have a jetpack or lack wings

The rope is always there, but the interaction with it is dependent on if your character has picked up the statue. I've edited it so the scene were the rope breaks only plays if the idol was actually taken (either by the milodans or by the character). Coming in with an old save, climbing the rope should break it if it wasn't already broken.

also there are two "fly down" locations for some reason?

This is intentional since the first one was supposed to be for the rift's edge, and the second one is an alternate option if you choose to follow the rope but not climb down the ledge. I've made it so the Climb button is visible to make that more obvious.

Bringing some attention to something I noticed on the wiki

The wiki page has been updated. The item looks fine to me, so it was probably fixed in the past.

gaining the "Lubricated" flag for you Anus instantly gives your butt the description like its gushing fluids like a busted fire hydrant

Yes, the lubricated flag is for over-production of fluids to where the orifice is constantly producing lube and always high in wetness. If you want regular wetness levels, do not make it lubricated.

but at what point does she tell us that she starts taking sterilex?

Besides that one mention, it is never stated directly, only inferred (even though it is noted more often in code for her content). If a character that would naturally get pregnant but doesn't, it is safe to assume they are using birth control, and Sterilex is the most commonly available one (if not the actual brand name, then the word being used as a catch-all for womb birth control), if I'm not mistaken.

For some reason, after doing the Friendly Male Naleen sex scenes, it gives you THE MANGO status effect. no idea why that is.

It is mentioned spending some time eating after having sex. The jungle has mango items that drop from time to time, so it is assumed your character ate a few of those--in eating them, "The Mango" is the temporary status effect given.

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

If you want regular wetness levels, do not make it lubricated.

Ah, now i get it: so that flag is specifically meant to be for those niche cases where people are into having a booty that leaks lube like a broken faucet, am I correct?

It is mentioned spending some time eating after having sex. The jungle has mango items that drop from time to time, so it is assumed your character ate a few of those--in eating them, "The Mango" is the temporary status effect given.

Ah yeah, those, lol. Regardless, it is still a bit confusing since there's a fair amount of inference going on, so I do think some tweaking in one way or another would help, but if and how that's done I'll leave up to you.

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

Besides that one mention, it is never stated directly, only inferred (even though it is noted more often in code for her content). If a character that would naturally get pregnant but doesn't, it is safe to assume they are using birth control, and Sterilex is the most commonly available one (if not the actual brand name, then the word being used as a catch-all for womb birth control), if I'm not mistaken.

Expanding off of this a little, I saw in the editor that there are some flags labeled as "Jana preg content" or something similar that were blank. I'm pretty sure that I haven't actually gotten her pregnant, and she's only gotten me pregnant, but the game is acting like it's the other way around for some reason.