There we are. I decided to link here the first fourteen pages of the project. It's not much, I know, I haven't reached the sex scenes yet, but I'd really like to start receiving some feedback before things get too complicated. This is the first time I write for this game and quite honestly I have no idea of what I am doing lol (the parser is killing me). Please leave all the comments, feedback and suggestion you want, and don't hold back. I so so want to get better at this.
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The Spectral Smith
The Spectral Smith Belmont01 Overview The spectral smith is a character that can be found in the Frozen Tower, in the Glacial Rift. This entire text takes place after the battle with the PC and Brint, after which she simply disappears. I decided to expand her backstory and make some interaction ...
