Recent content by Trebla

My writing may not be up to par. I spent days trying to edit my Halloween story and checking my spelling and tense and I still got shot down for tense errors and format problems. So I just want to ask if anyone is wiling to look it over and tell me where I can make improvements . I would like to...

This only my second submission to Fenoxo so I am not really familiar with how the parsers work so I did what i could without using them. I made a costume that transforms the PC and puts them into 'God Mode' so they can party day and night without any negative side effects. Checked my spelling...