My writing may not be up to par. I spent days trying to edit my Halloween story and checking my spelling and tense and I still got shot down for tense errors and format problems. So I just want to ask if anyone is wiling to look it over and tell me where I can make improvements . I would like to say I am not going to get mad or kill myself if you criticize my story like some here seem to think and I welcome CONSTRUCTIVE criticism not statements like 'You suck' and 'You stink' etc. I ask because I want to get better and maybe submit it again at some point or even write something else that is acceptable. Okay here it is https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SHRmRO03VaIDyCVmyV_n4Pely6Bx6Syuec-YnLLaz-Q/edit